Without the shadow of doubt, leaders are not normal people and they mostly belong to an elite group of society. These people have played a predominant role throught the history and form rise and fall of societies. We have good leaders and bad leaders like Mahatma Gandi and Kim. As some people may belive to be a leader one only should put lots of effort to it others might think vice versa. As far as I am concidered, Being a leader needs more intrinsics features and is more of a natural attribute. In the following I will delve into the most conpicuous reasons wich persuaded me to put forward this idea.
First and foremost, Leaders should be mentaly prepared to become one because they need to be charismatic and ifluential to persuade others to follow them. So it is a natural attribute of a person. An example can account for my point. We all are agreed that Hitler was a dictator but at the same time he was the one who made German people to become one and follow him. The way he used to behave no one could say no to him and most of people of the country belived him even he was telling lies. The influence of his behaivior and his speeches made mothers to send their children to war willingly only to advocate hittler. A large porpotion of the country were his adherents at the begining of his leadership since he was influential. This kind of characteristic is natural in some people.
Another point one should take to account this significant is, Leaders are busy people and should be able to handle predicaments which some times results in not being able to spend time with their family. So a leader should be able to live with no family which is hard for most of the people. Only a few people are able to do so and as a result I consider it as an inherent feature. An instance of this is Mahatma Gandi who founded the indian revolution against English government. He spend most of his time in prison away from his family, around fourty years of his life, and when he was out and won the battle agains the Status quo he had no time to spend with his family only in order to be able to attend a lot of meetings. So being alone and with no family requiers an intrinsic charecter.
The last but the least is having self confidenc which is another antural charachter of individuals. Self confidence permits a leader to decide with having no doubt. A leader without self confidence can not make choices whili facing a dilemma. For example, In Chernobil when the explosion of the atmic reactor took place no one knew what has happened for at least a week because the leader of that time, Gorbachiv, desided. This cause a majority of opulation who lived neer the power plant die. But the leader made this decision and sacrificed their life because he thought by declairing the problem, chaos would have spread out and might have resulted in worse consequences. Having a self confidence also is a natural feature.
To wrap it up, all aforementioned reasons and examples shows that to be a leader you need to live with no family and behave influntially. So I conclude that to be a leader one should have different natural features.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 280, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...bad leaders like Mahatma Gandi and Kim. As some people may belive to be a leader o...
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Line 3, column 426, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...o behave no one could say no to him and most of people of the country belived him even he was ...
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Line 5, column 485, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
...volution against English government. He spend most of his time in prison away from hi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, at least, for example, kind of, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2578.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 570.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52280701754 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88617158649 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50279990948 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477192982456 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 837.9 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4454901641 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8965517241 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6551724138 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.89655172414 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176045411588 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497733399838 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466765862944 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119041529119 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515692308086 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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