In this twenty first century, people are experiencing technological advancements more than any other periods in the history. Most people say that the life would be miserable without those inventions. I agree that modern world has brought many inventions that make our life easier on this planet because cooking can be done within minutes, traveling made hassle free and studying from home.
First and foremost, with the invention of kitchen appliances such as refrigerator, microwave and electric stove, cooking can be done fairly within minutes. For instance, I work full-time at an educational institution, so I cook my meals in the evening using an electric stove and refrigerate the left over for next day lunch. On the next, all I need to do have for my lunch is to heat-up my cooked lunch using the microwave for few minutes. As a result, my lunch always will be ready within minutes when compared to preparing meals in ancient times. For example, when I was a child, my grandmother spends all day in cooking as she needs to collect fire woods to cook and it takes ever to cook the meats. So, when compared to olden days cooking, I prefer modern lives which save lots of my cooking time and the spare time could be well-spent on maintaining healthy life by hitting the gym every day.
In addition to that, internet is the biggest invention that modern people enjoy the most which makes their life easier. Traveling is easier with online bookings that can be done while sitting at home and enjoy your favorite television show. For example, if I need to travel on holidays, all I need to do choose an online vacation package and pay using my credit card. Recently, we went on a trip to California to visit universal studio and Disney land. So, I went online and purchased vacation package which included flight tickets, accommodation and dining. All this was done within minutes and we enjoyed our trip. This would have been a hassle in olden days without the invention of internet. Furthermore, the advantage of internet is that it could be utilized for studying online without leaving the comfort of your home. Recently, I completed a diploma program from a university that is few hundred miles from my place. With the invention of online schooling, I was able to finish without going to physical institution which could have incurred my time and money. On top of this, I was working while I was studying. Hence, I was able to enjoy life without suffering from financial crisis which was the case back then where people have to choose school or work without the online schooling. This would not have been the case in those days as people need to go school actual school to pursue education.
In conclusion, I enjoy the modern life as it makes my life easier because it makes cooking, traveling and studying much easier when compared to olden days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-first
In this twenty first century, people are experiencing techno...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2370.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 495.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78787878788 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53635860798 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472727272727 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 743.4 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.641584112 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.043478261 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5217391304 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.60869565217 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116392511509 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037060507091 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487354471665 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104100599787 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054897891298 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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