Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
no, i am completely disagree with this statement. i think, generally traveling is so useful and great and it will be better if that be out of our country. people can learn a lot of things by traveling to other country. each of country have their cultures that been familiar with those can be interesting and wonder you. any country have foods that are specific for their country and by traveling you can taste those foods, you will enjoy from it or may be not but that will be an exprement so if you enjoyed from that food you can learn and make it by yourself in your home. it will be good if we have meet with people in other country and take them as our friends. some country are very ancient and there are many celasic and old things in there or some ancient buildings or temple. this ancient things will ateract many people that loves those. deserts, mountains, jungles, bridges, are so ateractive. i like to travel in every country because i think, it is valueable seeing other country even for one time. however many people can not travel to other country or even other city in their country bacause maybe they have no enough money or time for this. in other cases about different countries, kind of dressing may be interesting and will be fun if you can wear traditional clothes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 1977.66487455 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 235.0 407.700716846 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49361702128 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29955021484 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 212.727598566 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51914893617 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 618.680645161 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2078602172 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248520621713 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933067406591 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591640811649 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248520621713 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 86.8835125448 35% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.