Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well.
Last decade people are very busy with their life, Although many facilities are provided for them.
There is a famous Persian writer who is saying if you have many tasks to do, you can handle only one of them well, and the rest will be average. Doing one job correctly is much better than doing three tasks, but in the average class. From my point of view, I think if a person does more than one task, he can not put his effort as much as when he is doing one job only.
To begin with, people will lose their attention, so they cant do the task correctly. For instance, my friend, she has a kid, and she goes to the office every day when she is in office she has to call her kid to know how is she from office thus she can't concentrate on her task which is accounting because the same time she has to think and follow up her kid in the same time.
Secondly, time-consuming for doing tasks will be less if an IT person wants to do multiple tasks in this way if a task is there, the time to spend on that is more therefor the task is done much better with more accuracy. For example, a person who has to attend two meetings and should write a specific script to generate a report can not concentrate on getting a good result because his time split for sessions and coding. Moreover, tension will be there, so the result of coding will not be that sufficient.
Thirdly, struggling with different thoughts about many tasks which a person should do because of a busy life can make them a person with less commitment about their duties so that less commitment can produce a person a very careless person in his life too. To make this point clear, an engineer with many daily tasks makes him very tired, and he can't handle all the tasks, but he has to so he might enter the wrong data in the database and do not care about how critical are this data.
To sum up, because of busy life people need to do many tasks in parallel but that makes their impact very less. Although the loss energy. They are assigning too many tasks to reduce construction and commitment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 58, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ople will lose their attention, so they cant do the task correctly. For instance, my...
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Line 4, column 249, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...to know how is she from office thus she cant concentrate on her task which is accoun...
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Line 4, column 249, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cants'.
Suggestion: cants
...to know how is she from office thus she cant concentrate on her task which is accoun...
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Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...nsuming for doing tasks will be less if an IT person wants to do multiple tasks in th...
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Line 6, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g will not be that sufficient. Thirdly, struggling with different thoughts about...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...aily tasks makes him very tired, and he cant handle all the tasks, but he has to so ...
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Line 6, column 347, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cants'.
Suggestion: cants
...aily tasks makes him very tired, and he cant handle all the tasks, but he has to so ...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... but that makes their impact very less. Although the loss energy. They are assigning too...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, i think, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.273657289 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18218675289 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46547314578 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.0322288767 48.9658058833 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.357142857 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9285714286 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 5.45110844103 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2673280402 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109519539639 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768259426165 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151434511964 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047582775644 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.