Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the dawn of modern society in whole world, the people overwhelm in their duties which is created by many new aspects of modern life. For example, people were not involved with subjects like administrative works or civilization life in the medieval period. They permenantly work on their farm or have ocassionally tasks out of their regular life. Now, the question is triggred whether the mind engrossment of nowadays people influence the quality of their works? I'm in the belief that do multy tasks can effect on every tasks are done. I try to explain my notion in the following script.
First off, I think by doing many diffrent things, the concetration decreased and the quality of works either due to that. The free human live in advanced society responsible for all aspects of their life. So, at the same time, he must think in all matters such as the duties of his job, the foods he want to eat for next meal, the administrative tasks he should do and etc. On the other hand, the capacity of human brains are limmited to think all sides. In this ciccumstanse which engage all the mind, error is normal. For instans, several times it occured to me that I burned the foods when I was doing my universities assignment.
Another problem of inundating in several things is the stress and anxiety of other work can influence on the other one. It's not concealed to anyone that the stress of job can influence all the facet of life sometimes. For instance I have an example from my life when I was studing for the universities' entrance exam. At that time, I was similar to a died person in all other sides of my life as I couldn't speak to others normally. The important of the exam in that time affected me.
In sum, I think the new modern life want human to be as a computer but this issue can not occure anyway due to the limitation of human brain. Lack of concentration beside the stress of other works can disrupt brain to think regulary. Hence the quality of the works undergo donig multy tasks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, hence, if, so, for example, for instance, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56077348066 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50536648156 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513812154696 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9611046315 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.55 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0946512076749 0.236089414692 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278919379175 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312001201504 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0531120684384 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407262390661 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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