Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e-mail, they will produce better work for the project.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
On one side, some people can not have a good communicate in person, and can not share their ideas with others, so they prefer to work in a project by sending e-mail. I firmly disagree with this view, and I prefer to work in a person because of some benefits.
For the beginning, Internet access is too weak, and using it has really difficult, sometimes if we want to download articles or video, we have to wait for a long time, so it takes our time and bothering. In addition, we just can connect to the net while we are using wi-fi. if we are out side the home, or on the vacation, we will not be able to connect to the net. besides, we just can check our email on laptop. These problems cause, we can not have a good approach to finish our project on time. For example, last year, when I wanted to send an e-mail to my professor about my discovered, I stayed at home and waited, finally after five hours the e-mail sent.
Additionally, I think, for every project, we need different points and ideas because every person has specific points of view and knowledge, so if team workers have disscusion with each other, they can use different ideas and share their knowledge for the better result. besides, sometimes we can give a special idea at the moment, and if time spends, we might forget some thing. so, by sending e-mail and problems which I mentioned, we can not have a good disscusion with our team work. so, in this case, our project does not have a good consequence. For instance, when I was a university student, I had four team workers, three times a week we got together, share our result and disscus about project, in mintime, we had fun time too. we could finish our project in time with good results.
As a result, because of some problems by sending e-mail and advantages of commuicate in person, I would prefer to work in person even problems of sending email will solve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, if, really, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52298850575 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4144840281 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491379310345 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3928058531 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.933333333 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173630117467 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705129367202 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505941673104 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127636269005 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467302146271 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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