Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is a human nature that, people used to get bore when they carried out the similar kinds of the tasks all the day either in the educational, business or industrial sectors. I not only boring but also gives more stress to the people. So, It is my firm believe that workers are more satisfied if they have have many different tasks to do, for number of reasons and i will explain these ideas in the following subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, every people feel better if they get to work the different kinds of tasks during their workday. It makes people more fresh and gives the relieve from the stress, which used to occurs when people do the same work for the long period of the time. i have to admit that, my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. During my undergraduate period i used to get bored and feel more stress when i attend more than four lecture a day. So, in my undergraduate period i have carried out an field experiment in order to get the research experience. I used to involved in my study, laboratory and in to my research field at every day. These kinds of different activities give me more relieve from the mental stress and i do not get bored.
Secondly, when the workers are given to do the different kinds of tasks, it always help to increase their concentration over the work and also increase the working efficiency. In the present world, it is believe that the people get more active and effective if they have the better mental and psychological environment. So, the doing of a different kinds of task in the workday results the effectiveness of the work, freshness in the workers and finally leads to the progress of the particular sectors ( education, industrial, business, etc). For instance, when a children are pressured to study at every time results the decrease in their effectiveness of their study, as they get monotonous by reading every time. So, if the childrens are allowed to play, read, watch television, etc. it results the increase efficacy at every sector like education, health and communication.
Thirdly, workers get the better opportunity to know and do the different kinds of new work. The chance of doing the different new task not only give the freshness but also makes the development of knowledge and skills which is highly benefit for every worker in the future.
In the light of these above mentioned reasons, i strongly with the given statement.
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Suggestion: have
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2043.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76223776224 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66800706365 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44289044289 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5867867332 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.526315789 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5789473684 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313399215189 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097192824098 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763194317439 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180652514549 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896139933404 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.