Do you agree or disagree? Governments are doing good in educating people to pay attention to the importance of the food nutrition and healthy eating.
With the rapid development of the society, the advances of food production is evident than ever before, which leads to some unhealthy food and lack of nutrition. Thus, a heated topic arises: Whether the government is acting actively in order to bring people’s attention to the importance of food nutrition and healthy eating. While most people advocate the government does not pay much attention to it, I hold the opposite opinion for the following reasons.
First and foremost, governments are doing their part since they are supervising the farms as well as food markets rigidly in this day and age. As is known to all, it is a government’s responsibility to ensure the quality of food to a certain extent. Overseeing the recent situation precisely, governments have the most up-to-date information about many big farms and markets producing or selling food. For instance, to stress the necessity on healthy food, our government frequently reports the condition of food by visiting and monitoring the countryside where the farmland concentrates. Additionally, it also encourages farmers to improve their farming skills by providing them opportunities to come into the city and learn relevant courses. Thanks to the actions of our government, citizens are indeed paying more attention to healthy food.
Another point worth mentioning is that governments are devoting more money on the public service advertising about the enormous benefit healthy eating can bring us. There is no doubt that an increasing number of people are living a healthier life, while other individuals still do not have the slightest awareness of how the quality of food affect their body health. To address this problem, plenty of governments succeed in making this concept impressing as they keep spending money in advertising, performed by well-known celebrities. For example, after seeing my idle Jackie Chan’s commercial about food nutrients, I cannot emphasize its necessity more. Therefore, governments are playing a indispensable rule in such stuff.
Admittedly, there are governments who did not bring their emphasis about healthy food conception to full play. Nevertheless, their endeavor towards strengthening the public awareness can be seen at the same time. Thus, it is just a problem of time as so much importance they have attached.
To put it in a nutshell, as an ordinary citizen in the society, I can clearly feel an atmosphere facilitating people to care more about the food they eat and how much nutrients it includes, which is created by the governments. These are the reasons I strongly believe that governments are doing good in the stuff.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 698, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ore. Therefore, governments are playing a indispensable rule in such stuff. ...
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Line 17, column 163, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...re more about the food they eat and how much nutrients it includes, which is created...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2254.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34123222749 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02773968661 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57345971564 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 686.7 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8899759263 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.631578947 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2105263158 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30407133525 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902793793736 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716086839031 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163674512372 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654036949425 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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