No one can deny the fact that people do hard work in order to fulfill their dreams, and one of them is traveling all over the world. On that ground, seeing different landscapes, experiencing various cultures, are worth exploring during traveling. In this regard, some people contend that young age is the best time when people can enjoy traveling to different places. On the other side, there is a group of people who believe take it as an exaggeration and posit that traveling does not have age any limit, and so, people can enjoy traveling at any age which might be elderly too. Certainly, from my vantage point, the former view contains more weight. For the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most conspicuous reasons and examples justifying my stance.
The first exquisite reason to be mentioned is that irrefutably, young individuals are very energetic and enthusiastic that is suitable while traveling to distinct places because they do not only travel for long journeys but also might have to face rapid climate changes. In such a scenario, the elderly might not be able to adapt to drastic climate conditions since their bodies do not support them and they might face some serious health issues. besides, considering the medical insurance, apparently many insurance companies do not grant insurance if elders get sick while traveling. In contrast, youngsters are unlikely to face medical problems on trips. To shed more light on this, talking about my last trip to Australia can be a compelling example of what has been mentioned above. I went to Australia with my parents for a week. After a flight journey of more than eight hours, I bounced back easily without taking a rest, while my parents got sick, and thereby, they took rest for two days. As a result, they were not able to explore some places in Australia. Ultimately, it is judicious to say that people should travel abroad at a young age.
Another noteworthy reason is that traveling abroad is very costly and it is especially difficult when people do not have any flowing incomes. To be more specific, if elders spend all of their savings on traveling, they would face financial crises later on in their lives. However, spending a lot of money is not difficult for adults as they can recover from their jobs. To exemplify, last year, my uncle has decided to visit three countries on cruize. Therefore, he spends all of his life saving during this one trip. Even though he had made life-long amazing memories on that trip, it was not a wise decision that he made. This is because he got a heart attack last month, and subsequently, had to undergo extensive emergency heart surgery which cost him a lot of budgets. Since he spend all of his savings on that trip, he did not have enough bank balance to pay his own medical bills. Fortunately, his son paid all of his treatment charges. Admittedly, had he not spent his saving on the trip, he would not have asked for financial help.
To recapitulate, from contemplating all remarks, in spite of the fact that some may not agree with my viewpoint, I utterly posit that people should not wait to get old to explore new places instead they should do it at a young age. This is because they are capable to face health challenges on trips and because they are financially independent.
- TOEFL T P O 21 Integrated Writing Task 52
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
... might face some serious health issues. besides, considering the medical insurance, app...
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Line 5, column 784, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
...ich cost him a lot of budgets. Since he spend all of his savings on that trip, he did...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, in contrast, talking about, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2746.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 574.0 407.700716846 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78397212544 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89472135074 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57631048434 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 293.0 212.727598566 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510452961672 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 855.0 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 15.0 4.94265232975 303% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5174737398 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.703703704 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2592592593 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07407407407 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0850264798904 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0239285085479 0.076458572812 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357626184232 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0516766437629 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192009854324 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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