There is no doubt that universities have a tangible effect on students futures and careers. Universities help the students gain the information and their skills required to pursue their future success. In their endeavor to provide the maximum education benefits to their students, some universities spend their money to ensure faculty satisfy. Others, invest their money on improving infrastructure and enhancing facilities. As far as I'm concern, I agree with the later opinion. The basis for my views is because among all the university investments, investing in university infrastructures, like parking lots, library and computer lab are the most beneficial for the students studying process.
It should be acknowledged that students, nowaday, in increasing number use their own car as a solely type of transportation. With an ever increase in and cities, public transportation service can be limited in certain areas. providing abundant and free parking lots, encourages the students to drive their cars to the campus. For example, students daily commute from San Jose to The University of San Francesco could take up to half an hour compare with three hours in public transportation. If universities did not invest in campus parking lots, students could waste their valuable money and time commuting from and to the university is time.
In addition to the allocate more parking lot spaces for the students, library is a crucial part in students study process. Students are strive for a quiet place to study, books to read and computer to use. University library is the only place that offers a great place for the students to focus on their studies with an insignificant distraction. Yet, it also provides indispensable reference textbooks. Because they are expensive, students can not have access to them without library help.
Finally, with a technology advancement, students should be knowledgeable with the latest lab equipments. There is no point for the students to learn on old lab devices if they are not going to work or use it after they graduate. Investing in up to date lab devices, like computers and musical instruments, have incredible positive effect on students future. In fact, Students who is well knowledgeable with advanced computer systems and computers programs is more likely to get a better job position and better salary compare with his/her peers.
As a conclusion, we can safely say that universities can invest their money in many different ways to attract and help their students. However, investing most of their money updating university infrastructures is more important not only for the students, but also for the university.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: There is no doubt that universities have a tangible effect on students futures and careers.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to students and futures
are the most beneficial for the students
are the most beneficial ones for the students
are most beneficial for the students
could take up to half an hour compare with three hours in public transportation.
could take up to half an hour compared with three hours in public transportation.
could take up to half an hour to compare with three hours in public transportation.
Students who is well knowledgeable
Students who are well knowledgeable
As far as I'm concern,
As far as I'm concerned,
Sentence: In addition to the allocate more parking lot spaces for the students, library is a crucial part in students study process.
Description: The token the is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to the and allocate
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to students and study
Sentence: Investing in up to date lab devices, like computers and musical instruments, have incredible positive effect on students future.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to students and future
Sentence: It should be acknowledged that students, nowaday, in increasing number use their own car as a solely type of transportation.
Error: nowaday Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 427 350
No. of Characters: 2189 1500
No. of Different Words: 219 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.546 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.126 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.901 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 160 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 130 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 91 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 52 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.965 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.321 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.524 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.105 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 299, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...its to their students, some universities spend their money to ensure faculty sati...
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Line 1, column 437, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ure and enhancing facilities. As far as Im concern, I agree with the later opinion...
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Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('solely') instead an adjective, or a noun ('type') instead of another adjective.
... increasing number use their own car as a solely type of transportation. With an ever increas...
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Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Providing
...ervice can be limited in certain areas. providing abundant and free parking lots, encoura...
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e university is time. In addition to the allocate more parking lot spaces for the student...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore parking lot spaces for the students, library is a crucial part in students st...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'strived', 'striven'.
Suggestion: strived; striven
...n students study process. Students are strive for a quiet place to study, books to re...
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Line 5, column 494, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve access to them without library help. Finally, with a technology advancement, ...
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Line 7, column 285, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to date lab devices, like computers and musical instruments, have incredible pos...
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Line 9, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y say that universities can invest their money in many different ways to attract ...
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Line 9, column 81, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...universities can invest their money in many different ways to attract and help their students...
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Line 9, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... most of their money updating university infrastructures is more important not on...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'no doubt']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.290870488323 0.229887763892 127% => OK
Verbs: 0.138004246285 0.158761421928 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0828025477707 0.0866891130778 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0424628450106 0.046263068375 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0488322717622 0.0685040099705 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11889596603 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0339702760085 0.0351676179071 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.00177571438 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0424628450106 0.0309702414327 137% => OK
Particles: 0.00212314225053 0.00188951952338 112% => OK
Determiners: 0.072186836518 0.0887237588012 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0169851380042 0.0209618222197 81% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00212314225053 0.0139019557991 15% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2680.0 2387.08602151 112% => OK
No of words: 425.0 408.028673835 104% => OK
Chars per words: 6.30588235294 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.385882352941 0.338922669872 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.317647058824 0.251872472559 126% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.242352941176 0.174417080927 139% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136470588235 0.112833075102 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00177571438 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512941176471 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 57.8386297878 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.3181818182 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9688633918 48.84282405 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.818181818 120.699889404 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3181818182 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.54480286738 216% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 51.0828877005 45.7405998639 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.93518518519 1.45489161554 133% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325989403974 0.300154397459 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0916781943579 0.103427244359 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0717097052922 0.0752933317313 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.494935822631 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13751758049 0.151897553556 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119401684683 0.114077575197 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578954542448 0.0781384742642 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.346597362693 0.336927656856 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.100151560008 0.067059652881 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222992107274 0.210909579961 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334401601098 0.0618886996521 54% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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