There is a saying which states" stand up, and salute the teacher because a teacher is almost a profit" These words mean a lot to somebody who raised a many generations. However, these days , we don;t here much about the respect to teacher. In my opinion, teachers lost so much of their value to day and that is because of the reasons that I am going to highlight in my essay.
First, teachers now a days are paid relatively less than they use to earn. A decent income would allow teachers to be valued and respected. In the past, the teaching jobs were one of the highest paid jobs in the community. However, now a day, teachers have more hardships and sometimes they can barely pay there rent. For instance, two months ago, there was an article in the news about a teachers who is unable to find a home to rent in the city of San Francisco. The Mayer new about this incident ans promised to build more houses for teachers to offer them a better quality of life.
Moreover, teachers have less authorization to decide whether a student should pass or fail. In past teachers were granted full authority to evaluate students and make them move forward to the next stage or decide that they are not qualified to pass. However, now a day more regulations are in place to withhold teachers from taking decisions solely on personal judgment. Therefore, they are no more the stake holder to decide whether a child should pass or fail. Not having this critical judgment has devalued the teachers.
Finally, technology has changed the way of learning now a days. In the past students were attending classes and interacting more with teachers. On the other hand, today, there many course where student can join online. Having these type of courses reduces the communication level between the students and the teachers, even sometimes students do not need to see teachers face-to-face. As result, this new trend of teaching has devalued the role of the teachers as a corner -stone person in the educational process.
In conclusion, the teaching process is as any other profession, do change with the change in environmental factors. Technology has changed the way teachers interact with there students. Furthermore, the economical situation also has put it's shadow on the value of teachers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... a many generations. However, these days , we don;t here much about the respect to...
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Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...ghlight in my essay. First, teachers now a days are paid relatively less than they use ...
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Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ght in my essay. First, teachers now a days are paid relatively less than they use ...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...days are paid relatively less than they use to earn. A decent income would allow te...
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Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a teacher' or simply 'teachers'?
Suggestion: a teacher; teachers
... there was an article in the news about a teachers who is unable to find a home to rent in...
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Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...hnology has changed the way of learning now a days. In the past students were attending cl...
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Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ogy has changed the way of learning now a days. In the past students were attending cl...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun course seems to be countable; consider using: 'many courses'.
Suggestion: many courses
...achers. On the other hand, today, there many course where student can join online. Having t...
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Line 9, column 204, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...t with there students. Furthermore, the economical situation also has put its shadow on th...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts shadow on the value of teachers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, even so, for instance, in conclusion, of course, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86259541985 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65874665068 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539440203562 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1584665279 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8636363636 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8636363636 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22727272727 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263103013922 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728956382813 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036079855833 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136733126286 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277418230092 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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