Throughout history,maknig a decent decision has played a prevailing role in every individual'life. The inevitable question which has always caused debate among avademicians is whether in the past yong adult depended too much on their parents than nowadays or not. I am on the opinion that youth depended to their parents more in the past than now. In the following paragraph, I will elaborate on my view point through two noticeable reaons.
First of all,teenagers are less depended to their parents because they are more cognizant now. In other words, by using internet and specially social media they can broaden their horizon much more than juvenile in the past. For example, when I was at highschool several years ago, I wanted to choose a field in school and my parents suggested me mathematic. Had I not sought their advice, I would have a better career now.because of limited access to internet I couldn't asnwer my question about effectively and decisions and thought of my parenthad impact on my future life. This example illustrate the importance of knowledgeable of young peaple.
Secondly, youth nowadays do not consider their parents as role model and they imagine they are more well-informed in comparison to young people in the past. In fact, because of momentous changes that occured in 21 century, they have more kowledge than people in old generation. For example, my little sister without considering to our parents' idea, bought a company and started her desire career and became success in that field.She not only notice to other advice but also track her way. This example demostrate how
In conclusion, I strongly believe that youth nowadays are more indipendece in making decision withoun their parents involvemen because they are more knwledgeable and do not respect to their parent like past. This is why I think nowadays young are less depended to their parents.
- TOEFL T P O 47 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- TPO 49- Independent writingDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily. 70
- Parents today are more involved in their children’s education. Do you agree or disagree? 60
- TOEFL T P O 47 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- tpo 49 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10289389068 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78775353517 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565916398714 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3120706695 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.357142857 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244411485053 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086304706697 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469768999241 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160634889311 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388105242489 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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