Every generation is a unique and differ from others in many ways. My generation is totally different from my parent generation in important ways like education, development in technology and freedom.
First,Education is discouraged and sometimes banned specially for women. Therefore, mos of our parents weren't allowed to complete their higher education.On the contrary, in present generation , education is permitted for all and free.In addition we can travel to another country to take a degree. this freedom give us opportunity to know outside world and their culture. Also, we feel free and brave to talk in politics and government decision which was considered dangerous in parent's generation.
Another important difference, the development in technology is very fast but in the past was very slow. So the present generation know how to use them. For example, the young people use the internet very easy in browsing, chatting, conducting research and working. However our parent's didn't have internet and didn't use it.
Moreover, The mobiles and tablets are accessible for children ;although, our parents are still using the land line. Really, what I like most in my parent's generation that they know how to make a relationship with neighbors but, we don't have this quality and don't think about our neighbors.
In conclusion, there are many differences in both generation. In my view,we should learn from our parents and they learn from our generation
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , Education
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Message: Did you mean 'completing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: completing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, so, still, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my view, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 232.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32327586207 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90588051007 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594827586207 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7335290537 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2142857143 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 5.45110844103 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267726168069 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981176281903 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966540245346 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166613319062 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109784661441 0.0645574589148 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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