Films can tell us a lot about the country where they were made. What have you learned about a country from watching its movies? Use specific examples and details to support your response.
Every Country have their own identity which represents through culture, cousins, tradition and the life style of people of that particular country. Films are the medium, to show culture, cousins and tradition. And yes, I think we learn a lot about the particular country through movies.
There are different categories of films are available, documentaries, short-films and etc. I think the category of documentary film gives us an important information about the country. The documentary film is basically, a film who shows the real picture and shoot with single reel. Also, there are a film which are basically represents the special culture or tradition of that country. For example, In India the movie Name “Kaksparsh”, this movie represents the old culture and social behaviour towards women. Also, we can get an information about the laws and regulation of that country through the movies or films. We also, learn the thinking and mentality of people of that country while watching a movie. For example, the way they focused on the issues or the brute culture. And what message they want to give from their film. Moreover, what technologies they are using and the way of their representation everything is important and it gives the clear view of that country through movies. The important thing we can learn from a country is the different languages they speak.
Personally, I like to watch all types of movies action movies, romcom, documentaries etc. I learn a lot while watching the country, most of type when I watched a movie, I learn a much about the language of that particular country’s movie. Once, I was watching the Chinese documentary film, the film was about the rural Chinese people. In that film mostly they represent their culture, also how they work hard to survive. Their life style also the festivals etc. First time I saw this side of china, their culture and tradition amaze me. Also, the language is bit different than regular Chinese language we listen in movies.
Therefore, in my opinion we learn a lot about the country while watching their films and movies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: etc.
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Suggestion: bitten
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Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01428571429 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71342091486 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6600922854 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7727272727 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306446936325 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982004017266 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734782350769 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216011025679 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481733976812 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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