It cannot be denied that the financial support to artists may lay a burden on the governmental budget, and such a fact leads some in the society to generate the opinion that we should expose the artists to the power of the free market. Nevertheless, such an opinion needs to be scrutinized meticulously before a conclusion can be drawn. As far as social benefits, economy, and artistic creativity are concerned, I totally disagree with such a view.
First and foremost, the support to artists cannot be simply left to themselves and private parties, as art has an externality – it benefits the w...
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