Groups and organizations have always constituted a significant part of society. These entities provide support to people in various ways. From my point of view, organizations are essential because they fight for human rights and even for more.
First and foremost, organizations can offer people support in many domains. Generally, their mission is to defend human rights, to help people who are in need, sick, to fight against corruption, pollution, cruelty against other species, and so forth. Moreover, it is a method to bring people together, to unite them, to make people work in teams to create a better future. A non-profit organization can raise funds to assist the categories above. For example, back in high school, one of my colleagues discovered that he had leukemia. His relatives did not have enough income to pay for his costly treatment. Then, we decided that we could not stay and watch how he was dying. We collaborated with two organizations and started a campaign for raising the money. Luckily, our move was successful, and we were able to raise the necessary amount of money. Therefore, we can say we were a part of an organization and that we participated in its mission. It helped us to understand that oneness is essential for surviving difficult times.
To continue with, groups do offer moral support too. At present, people live at a rapid pace. They are under the pressure of daily problems and responsibilities and ignore the importance of mental health. Furthermore, neither individuals nor other medical institutions, think about how daily stress affects the insanity of a person. Fortunately, some groups are opened to address this topic, willing to offer therapeutic assistance for those who face mental issues. For instance, I was reading about an organization called ManKind Project a few days ago. Its purpose is to help people who are in depression caused by different reasons such as sexual orientation, discrimination, physical appearance, and so on. As far as I understood, it promotes equality between people, and they call each other "brothers" and "sisters." I read many stories of people who attended this group, and the members considered it a new family full of unconditional compassion and love. Thus, such groups are beneficial for those who need this kind of assistance.
To summarize, organizations and groups represent vital elements for the present society. This is because they are defenders of humans rights and because they can help people both from a financial and moral point of view.
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- Some people think that the automobile has improved modern life. Others think that the automobile has caused serious problems. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 81
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2157.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19759036145 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11320265542 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575903614458 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6373241085 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.28 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255961188784 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661818893889 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512007876513 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157568845618 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388290366711 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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