Since the dawn of urbanization, education played vital role in each society. Nowadays, many are adamant that a myriad of elements should be taken into consideration in order to examine its destructive and constructive facet of this issue. Due to its paramount importance, huge steps have been taken to elevate its role. Some people may hold the view that there are many important issues such as traffic, pollution in a city. Some others take opposite side and believe education is a key which solve every problem. I concur with latter group and consider that education is first.
The exquisite point which to be mentioned is that importance of knowledge. In our modern world, there are many problem such as air pollution, traffic etc. Government can solve these problem by increasing number of littered person. A vivid example which can be given to shed light on the subject is one of my own experience. When I was a student in Amsterdam before 2 years ago, I saw that people solve traffic problem by riding bicycles. Therefore local government support it and take less taxation.
Secondly, another reason which deserves some word to say is that littered people increase productivity. Thanks to new technologies, competition between companies has significantly increased compared last decades. Companies are eager to hire worker skilled to maximize their profit. At that point, education played vital role for students. If there were more library or place to study, people can increase their knowledge and test their abilities.
Lastly, although the aforementioned reasons are fires one which cross the mind at first glance. They are by no means the only reasons available. In fact, there is another subtle point which must be borne in mind. Education boost creativity. The noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statics, reveal by a team of scientists who work at Harvard University, show that higher educated people tend to be more creative than less ones. Furthermore, they are more sensible nature and use nature friend product.
To wrap it up, contemplating all foresaid reasons, one soon realize that education is significant key to open all door. I suppose that library, universities and schools are most important place in a city.
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- In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'many problems'.
Suggestion: many problems
...owledge. In our modern world, there are many problem such as air pollution, traffic etc. Gov...
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Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'problems'?
Suggestion: problems
...ge. In our modern world, there are many problem such as air pollution, traffic etc. Gov...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'these problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; these problems
...tion, traffic etc. Government can solve these problem by increasing number of littered person...
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Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...lve traffic problem by riding bicycles. Therefore local government support it and take le...
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Line 7, column 418, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun ones is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ed people tend to be more creative than less ones. Furthermore, they are more sensib...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, i suppose, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20110192837 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.816063068 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62258953168 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9905683492 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.52 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.52 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0560349445295 0.236089414692 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0156806684798 0.076458572812 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0205427599055 0.0737576698707 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0316167005414 0.150856017488 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01664785821 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 58.1214874552 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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