All of us study a lot of subjects in our schools, under-graduation and graduation; many of which may not be the subjects we ever wanted to study. So if I ever get an opportunity to study a new subject, which I never had studied, I would definitely learn about the outer space. The concept of outer space and outer space explorations has always fascinated me from my childhood- the stars, the planets, the galaxy and all others.
I remember when I was a kid, I enjoyed looking at the sky and wondering how pretty the stars looks. I was always enthusiastic to know about the outer space; how these galaxies were formed, how these starts shine, how the lights from the stars reach us or what are the planets and their features and so many other questions. My father used to say that I always badger him with these questions. As reading was one of hobbies, he bought me a lot of books about these subjects and I have read these books a hundred times. I always enjoyed learning new things about space.
Furthermore, the outer space explorations are one of a kind. It is so enthralling how the scientist work on space ships, send satellites to the space, gather information about distant stars, constellations and galaxies. Also, finding out more about outer space let us know how earth was formed and how life began on earth. Once I got an opportunity to visit the rocket launch center of ISRO at Sriharikota which increased my interest on outer space.
In conclusion, outer space gives information about the very existence of life on earth and learning more about it lets us know who we are. So studying more about outer space gives me happiness and self satisfaction and one day I wish to learn more about all of these.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 477, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a lot of books about these subjects and I have read these books a hundred times....
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Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... new things about space. Furthermore, the outer space explorations are one of ...
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Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...was formed and how life began on earth. Once I got an opportunity to visit the rocke...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, may, so, thus, as for, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61038961039 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65903342627 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512987012987 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1636657481 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.428571429 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0629589352686 0.236089414692 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0277434981471 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444490579458 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0451713999427 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463366017964 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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