If you want to recommend a way to reduce living expenses for your friend, which of the following will you choose? Why?
1. Find a roommate to share a room
2. Do not buy the latest mobile phone, Buy new technological devices less frequently
3. Buy cheap foods and cook home (do not often eat outside)
In my vantage point, sharing a room with a rommate can reduce living expenses tremendously since not only can you share the expenses of whole room but also, some hidden expenses can be reduced too.
The first reason which should be stated is that sharing expenses with someone obviously decrease expenses in many ways. To begin with, many young people nowadays are engaging with problems associated with room expenses. Having a room while living in a big city is of great importance but, most people only use the house because the need a place to sleep, releasing their tension or even cooking. Thus, should someone had a chance to find a roomate, they can diminish their expenses significantly since the expenses for water usage and electricity can be devided between them which always cost a single person a lot of money. Furthermore, using internet can cost a lot of money. For example, during my collage days i rented a room near the university and, after a month i realized that the room cost me a lot of money which i could not afford it even by working two part time job so, i put a flyer adjacent to the university searching for a roomate. After a month my expenses decreased and i was able to focus more on my university courses.
The other point which deserves some point is that sharing room with someone can decrease secondary cost which in total is beneficial. First, a roomate can help in many aspect especially if that person become a real friend. Sharing food or even doing shopping in turn can reduce the expenses too. let me illuminate this with an example, consider a person living alone. After a shopping he is not always available to cook or use the things that he bought so, they may get rotted and wasted. Therefore, sharing these things with roomate or using things together can reduce the expenses because cooking duty can be shred between rommate and it is healty too since it will decrease the obesity.
To sum up, sharing room with someone has many benefits. It can reduce the chief expenses as every room may cost and some expenses which are disguise is everyday life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69002695418 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40660811701 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504043126685 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2988941452 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1875 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124821317613 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048182126425 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407043684354 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974177599235 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237557247606 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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