It is clearly understood that in such a sophisticated world, the price of living alone in the big city are very high, so it is difficult for people, especially young people to pay the whole costs by themselves. I think it is very appropriate to say something about my recommend to my friend here. One of the friends moved out to the big city for studied in the university; in first month of living alone, he had a very big problem in financial staff. So I recommend a way to reduce his cost for living, I told him is very effective if he live with another person and find a roommate to share a room. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first important point to be mentioned is that when people start a new life by their own is very difficult for them to pay the whole cost by themselves. Therefore, it is very proper for them to share somethings with another person. Also, the price of renting a home in the big cities are very high, so it is necessary for this people to find a roommate and share the rent with each other. For example, when I left my country, and family to study in another country, I faced with many problem in my life, because the price of rent a room was very high and I did not that much money. Therefore, I decided to find a roommate, so I tried for that, and finally I rent a home with one of my classmate in city. After that, I got peace of mind because the cost of living did not bother me anymore.
Another reason which should be taken into consideration is that roommates can share many things such as car, bike, books, close, food with each other and that is very good for young people. Also more important any things they could find a good friend, and this kind of friendship is very valuable. I think another example of my personal experient would be very helpful to demonstrate this subject. When I was new in town and lived with my roommate, we share many things with each other and that was not necessary for ether of us to buy that staff by themselves. For example, we buy a drees and both of us using it in different situation or we share a car so we were able to have a car on that time. Also, we bout food together and cook for each other and that was very good because we save money and time by this way.
To make this story short, all the aforementioned information lead us to how we could make our life easier, and make our friendship strong, and finding a roommate could help a person to reduce their living cost; furthermore, they had had a better time beside each other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...s are very high, so it is necessary for this people to find a roommate and share the...
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Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'many problems'.
Suggestion: many problems
... study in another country, I faced with many problem in my life, because the price of rent a...
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Line 4, column 190, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...and that is very good for young people. Also more important any things they could fi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for example, i think, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 486.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28600823045 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43548833175 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438271604938 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 669.6 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.1987715653 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.722222222 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157607606158 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567829657542 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400440838537 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976485519067 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370961634347 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.9 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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