It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Knowledge knows no barrier. Although some people believe that having knowledge on a broader range of academic subjects is beneficial, however, I strongly feel that it's better to specialize on a specific domain consider the short and long term benefits. I firmly believe this was because of several reasons, and I will develop on these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, upskilling in a particular domain brings short term benefit in term of job opportunities. Today's job market is highly competitive and skilled employees are in high demand. Therefore, when someone specialize on a particular domain, they want to work as a professional in their career, they are in a better place to get hired by multinational corporations. Subsequently, they can land a job at their earlier age and support their family financially. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter is profoundly influenced by my own experience. You see, last year, when I was planning for pursuing master's degree, I was really confused which field to choose. Back then, I was having five years of experience working in an international company as a software developer. But, with a desire to switch my domain to data science, I decided to pursue master in Artificial Intelligence only, not in Computer Science, wide range covering multiple subjects. As a result, after completing my graduation, I got placed in an International company as a Data Scientist. For this reason, if I had never take the decision, I would have never achieved my dream of working as a Data Scientist.
Secondly, specialization helps you in long term as you would be in a better position to take the ownership while working as a professional. It is always necessary that we upskill ourselves on the domain we are working on rather than focusing on gaining knowledge on multiple subjects. In particular, this expertise comes handy when you are handling a critical situation. Drawing from my own experience, while working as a software developer in my previous organization in 2015, I remember, it was around 11 pm we along with my team members were busy to solve a bug in our product which could damage the customer's satisfaction. Consequently, it would cost huge loss to our company. However, I feel so blessed when I think about the moment when my team lead used his intensive knowledge of computer network and found out that this bug was due to a network issue at the customer side. As a result, we including our manager felt proud about him and he got promoted to Architect role. For this reason, it is certainly clear to see that if my team lead has never invested his time specializing in that domain, we would have faced a huge embarrassment.
In the light of the above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that it's always better to specialize in one subject instead of spending valuable time to learn multiple subjects. This is because it will help to outshine in career and allow us to be an expert of the subject, directly related to our future goal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'specializes'.
Suggestion: specializes
...in high demand. Therefore, when someone specialize on a particular domain, they want to wo...
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Line 3, column 1023, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...mpleting my graduation, I got placed in a International company as a Data Scienti...
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Line 3, column 1100, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...entist. For this reason, if I had never take the decision, I would have never achiev...
^^^^
Line 5, column 604, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
...g in our product which could damage the customers satisfaction. Consequently, it would co...
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Line 5, column 965, Rule ID: ARCHITECT_VERB[1]
Message: Architect is a noun, not a verb. Did you mean 'design' or 'devise'?
Suggestion: Design; Devise
... proud about him and he got promoted to Architect role. For this reason, it is certainly ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... directly related to our future goal.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, i feel, i think, in particular, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2503.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 514.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86964980545 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94158341524 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519455252918 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 794.7 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.59856630824 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3058476781 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.826086957 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.347826087 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26086956522 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142155961946 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365784880979 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460248925391 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100614487448 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428888951821 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.