Friendship is an extremely significant occurrence throughout a person's life. However many people have different beliefs about keeping old friends or making new ones, I personally agree with the idea of keeping old friends. I feel this way for two main reasons that it can save our time and also it can result in better problem solving.
To begin with, making new friends not only requires time allocation but also effort. By keeping old friends we can save the time which we needed to get to know new people, and spend that time more efficiently with our old friends. Moreover, getting to know new people needs effort and great consciousness. Drawing from my own experience, on the first day of university I started talking to the girl named Azita who was sitting next to me, and after that we started spending more time together. After two months, while I was completely trusted on her, I found out that she lied behind my back and scammed me. As you can see, old friends never do something like that.
Secondly, old friends know you better and they can suggest suitable solutions to your problems due to the better cognition they have of you. As an example, last week I encountered a problem with my professor, and I asked one of my university friends what should I do. She gave me some solutions, and I followed them but instead of solving the problem they made it worse. Later that day I talked to my high school friend about this issue, and the solution she proposed me was more effective than my university friends suggestion. So I recognized that old friends can answer better to your difficulties, because they are more familiar with your personality.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that it's beneficial to keep our old friends rather than trying to make new friends. This is because you don't need to allocate more time and try to know new people, and you can just count on your old friends and trust their assistency. So as the famous saying "old but gold" says, it's better to rely on our old friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ely significant occurrence throughout a persons life. However many people have differen...
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Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...t occurrence throughout a persons life. However many people have different beliefs abou...
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Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...o make new friends. This is because you dont need to allocate more time and try to k...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66946778711 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54644805182 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53781512605 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3515405868 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0588235294 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391789742341 0.236089414692 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125942643435 0.076458572812 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100320085196 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25125880703 0.150856017488 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622219957224 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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