It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
These days people are very interested to know about whatever happens around them all over the world. Although, they are very busy compare to before but still they used to follow up on the events which are occurring around them. In my point of view, not even has a bad effect on their life but it will surely help them to be aware of what is happening all over the world and get advantages from all these news. In this passage, I am going to write three main factors that might prove this fact.
To begin with, reporters always try to spread different news widely to everyone in the world. As a result, all people will aware of it. Somehow, people should know about all the events which are proceeding in the world to have a sense of which country or place has which problem or success and compare to their country and place. For instance, India is a very big country with a big population, this country has achieved much success in IT fried, When people Now about their achievements, they try to get to that point, As a result, individually people are improved in this matter of fact.
Secondly, people are very curious to know other countries or places difficulties to start thinking about the ways of solving that problem. Although they might be far away they still care as human beings. For example, Iraq is a country with many wars are happening inside it, In fact, many people are poor and need food and medicine so some rich countries help them to fulfil the deficiency.
Last but not least, knowing events and reading about them helps to learn many lessons in life. People can see what is happening in may places they can't go there and from far away protesting against all oppression that befalls them. To make this clear, woman’s rights are emitted in some part of the world so some other women from another side of this earth start protesting for them to get their rights and this is the best thing can happen in the world.
To sum up, it is very helpful to be informed about events around the world. Not even is good but it is very helpful for that part of the earth to know others are caring about them and they are not a loan. I addition to that, always they like to be aware of each other because we are a human being.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 399, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...r the world and get advantages from all these news. In this passage, I am going to write t...
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Line 4, column 147, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ee what is happening in may places they cant go there and from far away protesting a...
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Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ach other because we are a human being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, in fact, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41062801932 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15474100981 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463768115942 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3208521826 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.411764706 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3529411765 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251243683779 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952736949912 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627288916464 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159265385456 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577559961832 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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