It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
As everything in life is like a coin that has two different slides, people must weigh the pros and cons before jumping to conclusion. After all, each and every question or topic requires a careful deliberation in that there are always multiple variables to a truth. Even though some may adamantly believe that it's not crucial to know about the events in the world, I believe such opinion lacks coherence to some extent. In my humble opinion, it's essential for individuals to know everything happens around the world due to the following reasons.
First and foremost, people must realize everything around them, even if it doesn't affect their lifes and this can engender a myriad of advantages. The main reason behind this rationale, people must know the culture of other nations and how other people think. Furthermore, knowing these things will shape our personalities and way we think for better. In addition to this, Travelling abroad probably would help individuals to become more confidence. However, having knowledge about events may give some people the chance for a better future by attending them. To illustrate more thoroughly, My friend Jack was studying at the University of Jordan. last year an organization called "IEEE" visited his University also gave a conference there. Therefore, he searched in Google to get more information about them. So became more interesting in their organization and wanted to work with them. Subsequently, he contacted with them and attended to their events and start making connections there. Consequently, because of his attending to their events, he was able to work there. All in all we can't and shouldn't overlook the upsides of attending and learning about events around the world.
On top of this, not prioritize your knowledge about world events can result in unfavorable ramifications. In the eyes of many people in present-day society, most people are missing the chances to enhance their lives by not giving attention to most world events. In addition to this, people can't decide to visit a country, if they don't know about their culture. Events around the world for sure will not affect your life. but having some knowledge about country events would help you to become interested to visit their countries. A great example of this would be my uncle Sam, he never left his country to visit another. However, last month I talked to him about the event in China that I would to attend. Although he never been interested in leaving his country or attending events, he surprised me and asked to come with me. Long story short, it's clear as day to me, not having abroad knowledge about world events can be detrimental.
In summation, yes, it's virtually impossible to provide a completely satisfying answer to an open-ended question. Although the jury may be out in this given essay, we can come to a mutual agreement that every person around the world should know about the happening events around the world due to the following reasons and details mentioned above.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. 73
- Pterosaurs were an ancient group of winged reptiles that lived alongside the dinosaurs. Many pterosaurs were very large, some as large as a giraffe and with a wingspan of over 12 meters. Paleontologists have long wondered whether large pterosaurs were cap 73
- A huge marine mammal known as Steller’s sea cow once lived in the waters around Bering Island off the coast of Siberia. It was described in 1741 by Georg W. Steller, a naturalist who was among the first European to see one. In 1768 the animal became ext 78
- In 1912 a bookseller named Wilfrid M. Voynich acquired a beautifully illustrated handwritten book (manuscript) written on vellum (vellum is a material that was used for writing before the introduction of paper). The “Voynich manuscript,” as it became 80
- Like many creatures, humpback whales migrate long distances for feeding and mating purposes. How animals manage to migrate long distances is often puzzling. In the case of humpback whales, we may have found the answer: they may be navigating by the stars, 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, after all, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2531.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 503.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03180914513 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69524586634 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522862823062 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 787.5 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3143567383 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7407407407 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6296296296 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92592592593 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292736606363 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080522332751 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966506894323 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18698727853 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345284660107 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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