Is it more important to be able to work with a group of people on a team or to work independently? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
A controversial concept usually laid out in most schools, universities and work spaces, is that should a certain task be completed independently or in a team. Although many people would rather work alone on a task as they believe they can complete it more productively and according to their own preference, I believe learning the ability to work effectively in a team is very crucial. As a matter of fact, I think a major point that differentiates developing countries from the advanced ones is the ability of the people in different levels of society, from high-ranking politicians to students in school, to communicate and work together on different tasks. Among all the vital benefits this ability has for a person and the society as a whole, I will shortly address a few points.
One of the simplest advantages of taking on a specific work as a team rather than independently, is time efficiency. It is quite evident that a group of well-managed people can complete a certain assignment in shorter time than one person alone. Thus, with an effective and professional team, more tasks and significant assignments can be completed in a certain amount of time, leading to higher productivity. This is especially crucial for an evolving businessman or employee.
As an old saying goes, two minds are always better than one. In a team, we have different points of view swirling about. These different viewpoints and opinions can enlighten different features of an assignment, come up with a variety of solutions for a specific problem at hand, and shed light on various ways of going about a task that may not be obvious to one person. So in a team, we can be familiarized with different viewpoints on a matter and come up with the best solution or routine to take on a certain task. Whereas, when working independently, one does not have the privilege of being acquainted with different takes on the problem and various solutions.
Another reason that underlines the necessity of teamwork, is specialization. With the various specialties today’s world brings and the deep knowledge each field requires, no one man can be familiar with more than one or at the most, two fields. In a team, we can gather people adept in different majors and employ different specialists to a task. This way, a certain matter will be handled with a high level of professionalism and clearly, a better result will be attained than when the task is enrolled by one person.
To conclude, although teamwork has its own complications, I believe it is very crucial to learn the ability to work effectively in a group of professional people. Teamwork, if handled properly, can ensure greater productivity, better time-management, higher professionalism and more sophisticated results for various solutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, i think, in short, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2329.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 463.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03023758099 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15748124006 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488120950324 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 729.0 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7316070106 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.578947368 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3684210526 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21052631579 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231143057598 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764296032982 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050425459673 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137094819332 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347904852609 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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