It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
First of all, I am convinced that old friends are the best support that people can find from anyone because they were, are, and will be friends forever. In addition, support is a unique feature that family and close friends have. I have to admit that this view has been influenced by my own personal experience. A few years ago, I experienced tough times. More specifically, I lost my parents in an car accident. I didn’t have any siblings or any family that supported me, though, my old friend stayed close to me in those hard times. I will never forget his unbelievable support.
Second, if people want to spend time with friends, then they should share those times with old friends than new ones especially when people have common ground between each other. Of course, others may choose to spend time with new friends. In my case, I like to work out sometimes during the week. Tennis is definitely the sport that I love the most. But, it is not only a game that I share with friends, but also a time I can talk with a close mate. We can spend time talking about so many topics such as family, business, and travel, for instance. Thus, tennis games are moments that I could not do with another person who is not an old friend.
Finally, the word, confidence, is an extra value that old friends surely have. In other words, people can trust them with everything. People can tell old friends what they don’t tell recent friends.
I have been living in Argentina. Nevertheless, for business reasons I had to move to the US for a couple of months. I was obligated to find a person who would take care of my kids. The first person who I thought that could do this job was an old friend. (Immediately, an old friend came to mind.) I thought of him not only because he was available, but also because he was the most reliable person with whom I could leave my own children.
I thought of him not only because he available, but also because he was the most reliable person with whom I could leave my children.
In conclusion, for all those reasons I mentioned above, I firmly believe that old friends are better choice than new friends.
- fewer cars in the future 70
- overpopulation problem 90
- In some countries teenagers have jobs while they are still students Do you think this is a good idea Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details 70
- Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful What is your opinion 66
- It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 397, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...More specifically, I lost my parents in an car accident. I didn’t have any sibling...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, then, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, of course, such as, talking about, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50256410256 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38948496455 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510256410256 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7955764607 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.24 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226661495428 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068423414125 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801764924226 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131597902502 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720646481294 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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