It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
The most important and unreplaceable relationship in everyone's life is definitely a friendship. Without a friendship, no one can
survive in human society. Every day we encounter new things, new people and so on. In this respect, we do have a chance to
make a new friend every day. I strongly disagree with the idea that keeping old friends is more essential than making new
friends and in what follows I will elaborate on my viewpoint.
First of all, we cannot get along with our old friends in new places all the time. When we change the situation sometimes we
just have to deal with it. In my experience, during my freshman year in university, most of my high school friends were in
different universities. In order to get used to the new environment, I decided to go to the sewing club and make friends.
Consequently, I had ice break and discovered new things and dping great with my new acquaintances.
Another reason is new experiences come with new company. We all know that humans are social and herd-oriented and he or
she cannot do everything on himself or herself. Suppose that you are going to work in a printing company from working in a
law firm. In your new job you can learn new things with new people and most likely to get closer with some of them. Most
important thing is you cannot learn about printing and press on a professional level with your former friends.
To sum up, al of aforement reasons lead us to draw the conclusion that encountering new people and getting closer is more
considerable thing that always trying to keep your old ones. It is mainly due to the fact that friends come and go, we cannot be
with our old friends, and we have to have a courage to experoence new thing along with new people.
- TPO 49 Integrated writing 70
- It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends 63
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The opinions of celebrities such as famous entertainers and athletes are more important to younger people than they are to older people Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 90
- It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends 63
- Tpo 47 Integrated essay 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...old friends in new places all the time. When we change the situation sometimes we j...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, so, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59872611465 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71142389649 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535031847134 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9704829424 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9411764706 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05882352941 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.53405017921 331% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360151685166 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113290341685 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111725922459 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12502078738 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132666278782 0.0645574589148 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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