It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
It is generally said that friends are need and friends are indeed. No one can deny the fact that friend paly indispensible role in everyone life, because without them we cannot enjoy life. In my view, keeping old friend in our life could be more beneficial instead making new ones. Here, I will provides some reasons of my agreement in subsequent paragraph.
To begin with, old friends are as though our family and we cannot make new family as per our requirement. One thing I learned from my own life experience is that people made lots of friend in order to learn variety of activities or some creative things, though whenever you need any help that time only old friends come first. For example, in the era of 21st century, everyone made so many friends on social networking sites owing to the advents of internet yet, if you suffer with some problem such as medical emergency that time you ought to call your old friends rather than putting message on social media.
Secondly, sometimes keeping old friends in our life, make our life enthusiastic, joyful and relaxed. When we feel stress and anxiety then we would prefer go out with old or school friends because only they can understand what pressure had been felt. According to some study, it shows that people enjoy more life with their friends instead their life partner. Furthermore, our old friend tries every possible things to make us happy and solve issues which we have been facing in life.
However, nowadays the computation of making wide range of friends is being increased because it would help people to being popular and famous among world. For instance, many celebrities have lots of followers and friends, which make them renowned in world. Moreover, by making new friends, we can learn different language and variety of culture. Suppose, friends from china and USA facilitate us to understanding what culture and the believes they are holding. Nevertheless, these new friends would not help us, if we trap in some difficult situation. Sometime these social media friends are used our emotion and take advantage to do fraud with us.
To the nutshell, old friends can take care of ours as like as family do. They can help us financially also, if we had scarcity of money. There are few advantages of gathering with new friends but drawbacks of making new friend more overweight. Therefore, I firmly believe that it’s always important to keep old friends who helped us at every phase of life. As a result we enjoy more life with old friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
... instead making new ones. Here, I will provides some reasons of my agreement in subsequ...
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Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun friend seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of friends'.
Suggestion: lots of friends
...own life experience is that people made lots of friend in order to learn variety of activities...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore, our old friend tries every possible things to make us happy and solve issues...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d solve issues which we have been facing in life. However, nowadays the comput...
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Line 7, column 435, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beliefs' (noun) instead of believes (verb)?
Suggestion: beliefs
...s to understanding what culture and the believes they are holding. Nevertheless, these ...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s who helped us at every phase of life. As a result we enjoy more life with old fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2095.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83833718245 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44577000794 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531177829099 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.293838336 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2272727273 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6818181818 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464435828953 0.236089414692 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152635989977 0.076458572812 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102454045386 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295035263357 0.150856017488 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659431598034 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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