It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
I firmly believe in the adage that the bond of friendship only grows stronger with time. In my opinion, it is more important to maintain friendship with your old friends before looking for new ones. Firendship is a sacred bond and usually requires years upon years of constant emotional work to maintain. In today's world particulary, I believe keeping exisitng friends is paramount becasue of the reasons that I discuss in the following essay.
To begin with, friends play the role of support systems in our lives. They are the ones to whom we go in times of trouble. This is specifically true in the case of old and close friends. Old friends are more or less familar with our capabilities and habits. Thus, they are in the most prominent position to give us sound advice whenever we are troubled. Furthermore, old friends usually know us since childhood and therefore, they are not tainted by our achievements or lack of them. They stay besides you either way without any judgement or expectations. My own personal experience is a good example of this. I tend to have few friends but the ones that I do have known me ever since my high school. I share all my good or bad experiences with this closely knit group. They act as my pillars of support and I can count on them throughout my life.
Furthermore, it is really difficult to meet friends that can understand you better than your old friends. I particularly find it to be a daunting task to make new friends. Moreover, this task becomes more and more difficult as life progresses. This is primarily due to a lack of desire as well as time on part of people to create and maintain new friendships. For instance, I have personally tried hard to create new friends at my work place but have failed miserably each time. This is a testament to the fact that people do not have the kind of time that a friendship entails. People are too busy with their hectic lives to mull over the task of making friends.
In conclusion, I would like to underscore the above mentioned points and state that school or college friends are worth keeping around in your lives before trying to move on and make acquantainces. Each person in a relationship has the duty to keep the bond of friendship alive and fruitful for years to come.
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'really', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'as well as', 'in my opinion', 'more or less', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220720720721 0.229887763892 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.153153153153 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0923423423423 0.0866891130778 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0608108108108 0.046263068375 131% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0923423423423 0.0685040099705 135% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.130630630631 0.118717715034 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0225225225225 0.0351676179071 64% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68078075467 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0405405405405 0.0309702414327 131% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0743243243243 0.0887237588012 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00675675675676 0.0209618222197 32% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00900900900901 0.0139019557991 65% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2276.0 2387.08602151 95% => OK
No of words: 406.0 408.028673835 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60591133005 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.293103448276 0.338922669872 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.231527093596 0.251872472559 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.150246305419 0.174417080927 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.105911330049 0.112833075102 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68078075467 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522167487685 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 58.4736506199 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 16.9166666667 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1626724636 48.84282405 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8333333333 120.699889404 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.644075263715 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 40.0693760263 45.7405998639 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.22058823529 1.45489161554 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377663100137 0.300154397459 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10329111631 0.103427244359 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0435527089743 0.0752933317313 58% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.439728004142 0.497263757937 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130553159103 0.151897553556 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132629245944 0.114077575197 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128382240548 0.0781384742642 164% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.33226874228 0.336927656856 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.024503074667 0.067059652881 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262703639311 0.210909579961 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103724183522 0.0618886996521 168% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8870967742 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 16.0 8.42114695341 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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