Although many people think that making new friends is better then always stuck with old ones, i think that is more advantageous to keep old comrade. I think this way for the following reasons that i will explore in the following essay.
First of all, the old friends are the most people that can understand and support us in our life. With the time we grow up, problems and responsibilities grow also with us, at this time new people cant help you so much to struggle the life difficulties because simply they don't really know your personality, the way you think, or maybe an important think that happened to you in the past, they will give you sometimes wrong answers and wrong solutions that don't fit with your opinions even when you explain the situation, in mean while your old friend will figure out what is best for you because they know better your way of life and what suits you. My experience in life is a compelling example of this. My new friends that i met in university are really nice but there is many times that i face problems and they don't understand what i really need, and even they don't know how to support me, however at that hard times and even when my old friends are far away i get relaxed when i talk with them, just a phone call,or a small conversation on face book will help me to restore and find myself .For this reason i believe old friends are more important that the new ones .
Secondly, the friendship rely on many qualities and the most important is the confidence. The old friends are more trusted then new people. Nowadays it is extremely hard to find people that we can trust and relay on them, the true meaning of friendship started to vanish as more as we get old . For instance, my sister is the type of person that make a lot of friends and usually she don't keep the old ones and at the time we meet she always talking about problems caused by the new friends, trust issues, lies... and this make me strongly believe that old friends are the best .
Based on the above discussion, i believe that old friends can support us more during the trip of our life and we can relay on them as long as they are the most trusted people . My father says old friends are a treasure that we should always keep it .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, i think, talking about, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37320574163 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28080078276 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433014354067 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.087475477 48.9658058833 313% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.615384615 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1538461538 20.6045352989 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 5.45110844103 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.5376344086 488% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314639981889 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124209583027 0.076458572812 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809984852691 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202112260373 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448067260219 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.38 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.66 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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