In my opinion, keeping old friends is more important than making new friends. Every one of us makes some friends when we are young and some are able to maintain this childhood relationship until they become mature enough to understand the world. Traveling or staying with friends has been one of the most enjoyable moments for me in my life till now. As we grow, we make friends at various places such as at work, where we live, childhood friends, college friends, school friends, etc. We make a lot of friends in our entire life. But, according to me, maintaining an old friendship is more important than making new friends.
If we stay attached to our old friends then this shows that we are loyal to them. That they can trust us and we are always there for them when they need us. This helps in making friendship more stronger and flexible. On the other hand, if instead of keeping the old friendship alive we start making new friends and forget about the old friends, we may lose friendship with them forever. For some people, whom we are friends from childhood, breaking friendship is quite strange and disheartening.
Moreover, old friends know us from the inside out. In other words, they know about our behavior, attitude, and sense of humor. So if we make a joke of someone in the group meet, they do not take it very seriously. But this might not be the case with new friends. They don't know anything about us because of less interaction. In this situation, if we made a joke on a peculiarity of someone in the group of new friends they might not take it sarcastically, rather they can consider us rude or immature and may avoid future talking.
To conclude, although making new friends is important because humans feel happy by being more social than alone, but maintaining a friendship with old friends is more important, in my opinion. This proves our loyalty towards friendship and we can be open with them about our thinking. For these reasons I support keeping old friends.
- It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay. 70
- Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: grades encourage students to learn. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 60
- Do you think that television programs, movies, and video games have influenced on young people's behavior. 77
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e important than making new friends. If we stay attached to our old friends the...
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Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...eed us. This helps in making friendship more stronger and flexible. On the other hand, if ins...
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Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... not be the case with new friends. They dont know anything about us because of less ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, then, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67897727273 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5173324149 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494318181818 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3065989281 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.35 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401586242893 0.236089414692 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157256850951 0.076458572812 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.182744185801 0.0737576698707 248% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288081529278 0.150856017488 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131192002723 0.0645574589148 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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