It is more important to keep your old friends than to make new friends.
No any individual can survive without being social. People always need someone to share their joy, problems, happiness, and for celebration. Friends are an integral part of life and a person is judged how social he or she is on the basis of friendly relation he or she has maintained all their life. While some people may agree that making new friends is important than keeping an old friend but I contradict with that statement. I feel this way because of the following reason.
Firstly, it is of uttermost importance about having a good friend instead of having many friends. Good friends will always help you with your problems and take you out of that problem. I believe that less keeping a definite circle of a friend is superior than making new friends time and again. New friends will not have ideas about your life, about your way of thinking and your behaviour. But if you stick with your old friends, you do not have to bring a change in your behaviour to fit in a group. Once I had to move to next school far from my previous school since my dad had his job posted there, it was hard for me to get along with the friends there. I was not treated in a good way since my behaviour of greeting them was not good, but that thing never bothered my old friends.
An old friend is like family. They will be with you no matter what mistakes you have made, they will treat same as before. But it is hard to cope with new friends. It takes time to get along with the new friends you have just met. Making new friends have been a lot easier due to the development of technologies and invention. I would prefer my old friend over a virtual friend. Such an incident happened when I was in final year of high school. I made a good friend on the internet and when my school trip was in the place where my new internet friend was living, I was excited to meet him yet nothing came out as we expected when we met after a long chat on the internet. But nothing changes between you and your old friend if you do not meet for a long time also.
Additionally, it is hard to find someone who knows you more than yourself. Making new friend is not an arduous task, but it is hard to maintain the same relation as you had with your old friend. Because your old friend will never make fun of your weakness and never take advantages of your strength, I believe old friends are more important.
Due to the aforementioned reasons, I think that keeping old friends is more important than it is to make new friends. Keeping old friends has more advantages than making new friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: Now
No any individual can survive without bein...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...definite circle of a friend is superior than making new friends time and again. New ...
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Line 5, column 762, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...iend if you do not meet for a long time also. Additionally, it is hard to find so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, while, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2104.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38333333333 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32288957383 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445833333333 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9338282648 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9230769231 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.526559779988 0.236089414692 223% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180648116504 0.076458572812 236% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.186675527411 0.0737576698707 253% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.400212528216 0.150856017488 265% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.206336468062 0.0645574589148 320% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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