Friends are integral part of one's life. I personally, believes that we do need new friends from different stage to stage in our life. New friends can share new knowledge, they can help us meet new people and most importantly there is always someone for you when old friends are away.
First of all, new friends means a chance to share new things. We receive a great opportunity to learn language , some information or a new way of doing things we already do. We can also share our knowledge which will also helps in doubling our existing knowledge. For example, in my high school, we had a new classmate who transferred from another city to our school. After becoming friends with him I was able to learn his language and culture which was quite different from mine. I gained lot of information about art and literature written in his language. It certainly broadened my horizon.
Furthermore, in addition to learning new stuff I was able meet new people. My new friend not only introduced me to his roommates but also with his friends from other school. I got an opportunity to make several friends, which help me develop a great network of friends. We all including my old friends use to hangout together on weekends and do many fun activities on weekend. It's really enjoyable to spend time with so many people. You never get bored and there is always someone for your company.
Finally, some might argue that making new friends even though you are having old friends can waste lot of time, which can be use to nurture the friendship with the old friends. But, I argue that it's really worth spending that time with new people as well, because sometimes we cannot depend on old friends, they might leave the town to settle in another city or they are not able to help you for several personal reasons. In that case if you have many friends such as old and new you can get help from everyone. You get more people to share your feelings.
To wrap up, I conclude that is necessary to make new friends at every step in our life because it will broaden your interests, provide lots of shoulder to cry on in case of sadness and old friends may not last with you forever.
- TOEFL integrated writing: Dutch painter Rembrandt 61
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- TPO-43 - Independent Writing Task Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do?-Interrupt and correct the mistake right away-Wa 53
- It is more important to keep your old friends than to make new friends. 66
- TPO-09 - Integrated Writing Task Car manufacturers and governments have been eagerly seeking a replacement for the automobile's main source of power, the internal-combustion engine. By far the most promising alternative source of energy for cars is the hy 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
Friends are integral part of ones life. I personally, believes that we do...
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Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ve a great opportunity to learn language , some information or a new way of doing ...
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Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: BE_USE_TO_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...nds can waste lot of time, which can be use to nurture the friendship with the old ...
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Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...nds can waste lot of time, which can be use to nurture the friendship with the old ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, really, so, well, for example, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5637755102 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39711943537 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7370129763 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1904761905 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323232215749 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970766168548 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758466685983 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205298236129 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607874606536 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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