It is more important to make new friends than to keep old friends?
No one can deny that there are both negative and positive aspects of friends. Some people prefer make new friends. However people would like to keep old friends. If I were to choose one, I would like to hold my old friends for several resons, which I will explain in the following paragraphs.
First of all, old friends are the best support that people can find from anyone, because they was, are, and will friends for so many years. In my case, a few years ago, I passed through tough time, more specifically, I lost my parents in an accident car. Thus, my friend was the most crucial person who stayed with me in those hard times. I never forgot his unbelievable support.
Second, if people want to spend time with a friend, I believe a better option is share those time with old friend than a new one. Especially, when people have common ground between each other. For instance, I love play tennis, but for me, it is not only a game, but also it is time during the day where I can talk with my friend. We spend time talking about so much things such as family, business, travels. Thus, those tennis games I could not do with another person that my friend.
Finally, the word confidence it is an extra vitude that old friend have. In other words, people can trust to them everything that they do not could say to anyone. For example, I am living in Argentina in the last two years, but for bussiness reasons I had to move to the US, and I was obligated to find a person who take care of my kids, the first person who offered to do this job was my best old. For me, he was not only the best option, but also he was the best person who could take care my children.
In conclusion, for all those reasons I mentioned above, I firmily believe that old friends are better choise than make a new friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...s. Some people prefer make new friends. However people would like to keep old friends. ...
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Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'friend'
Suggestion: friend
...anyone, because they was, are, and will friends for so many years. In my case, a few ye...
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Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... friend. We spend time talking about so much things such as family, business, travel...
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Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'friend'?
Suggestion: friend
...iends are better choise than make a new friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, talking about, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30588235294 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2048703561 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541176470588 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5469363541 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3333333333 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279553198158 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936930714417 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944635554549 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183116559687 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755218678854 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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