The history of humanity already had a lot of leaders and most of them are dead, for example, President Kennedy and Martin Luther King. Others leaders still alive, for example, Pope Francisco which is the person that I think is the greatest leader nowadays.
First of all, Francisco has started his papacy in a moment that the Catholic church has been passing a bad moment because the other pope did not be so popular because he changed some laws that they are not good to some people. The main point of the Francisco administration is helping the poor, visit the people in the jail. Doing this, the community has started to have the same feeling and they have done the same thing. In addition, Francisco became closer to the leaders of another religion.
Second, Pope Francisco assumed some mistakes committed by the Catholic church in the past and people stopped to complain about these issues. I remember when he wrote down one note on his twitter account about this, I was in my university in and people around me become to be happy and talking how good this was to humanity because is import to assume the responsibility about our acts. This changed my life because was hard to imagine how someone can point off their own problem even though a huge problem and may affect all the authority.
Thirdly he is very popular and respected, people believe in what he says about, actually, they did not use to like the church and people there. Because of the Pope Francisco ways to approach some problems some of they, in fact, started to go to the church. I have a friend he always said to me that he will never go to church because he was homosexual. After Pope Francisco demonstrated love for everyone no matter who are, he started to feel loved and he went to church and unbelievable he became a priest.
In conclusion. Pope Francisco revolutionized the Catholic church, demonstrating love, friendship, and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, may, second, so, still, third, thirdly, as to, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73432835821 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52676649046 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531343283582 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3231315897 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 5.45110844103 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116460313908 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481824155706 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610641171963 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757279161541 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854015022223 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.