Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when my grandparents were children
It is undeniable that technology has enhanced our lives to a superior level. After all, because of the technology we are living a life full of comfort and things get done easily than earlier times. Yet, there could be a debate over the life of today and the earlier times. Some people might argue that life at the time of our grandparents was comfortable. However, I strongly agree that life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when my grandparents were children. I feel this way for three main reasons which I will attempt to explain in the following paragraphs.
First of all, the automobiles have cut down our commuting time. In earlier times, when there were no automobiles available such as buses, vehicles, etc. the people have to walk for miles to go from one place to another. As a result, most of their time got waste in walking to the destination and they got exhausted. However, today we can travel long distances in a very short time and we save our energy, which can be used for any other purpose. From my personal experience, I had to reach to the college at 11.30 yesterday but as there are no buses available, I have to cover that distance by walk. And finally, I had reached college but at 12 o'clock and I started feeling exhausted and cannot concentrate on the lecture. The above incident clearly depicts my point.
Another major consideration is electronic machines for completing our daily chores such as washing machines, vacuüm cleaners, etc. Because of these machines, we can complete our daily chores easily, and when these machines were not available people have to struggle to do all these things. For instance, for washing clothes, we have to soak it, wash it, and finally rinse it but because of the washing machines, we just have to put the clothes in it and all the tasks are performed by a machine and we save lots of time and efforts. This indicates that machines has made our task easier.
Lastly, one should think about today's work routine. We just have to sit on the chair and work on the computers with the AC rooms. This is so much comfortable for us, rather than workers of earlier times. For example, in our grandparents time, no such facilities were available and they have to struggle a lot as a result, they can do their work efficiently. But, as we have so many facilities available in our office we can better focus on work. This points to the fact that our lives are more comfortable.
To be conclusive, there are a lot of facilities available today which were never there in our grandparent's times such as automobiles and electronic machines which make our life easier and comfortable than before. Therefore, I agree with the point that today's life is easier and comfortable that the lives of our grandparents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 646, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...inally, I had reached college but at 12 oclock and I started feeling exhausted and can...
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Line 17, column 253, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
... Therefore, I agree with the point that todays life is easier and comfortable that the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, lastly, so, therefore, after all, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2302.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 489.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70756646217 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63140047628 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458077709611 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 739.8 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6793561819 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5384615385 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8076923077 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26923076923 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275844384158 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875053354994 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160236927998 0.0737576698707 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189688492979 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159662413851 0.0645574589148 247% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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