No one can deny that life was easier and luxurious in some aspects when our grandparents were children but in some aspects life is easier today. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely take the position of life being easier these days comparing to the previous days. It is my firm belief that living becomes comfortable in the modern days for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, we do have internet access and various means of transportation in these days comparing to previous one, which is definitely helping us to get good job. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, as my grandfather used to told me that at his time, it was very harder to find the job in the rustic place. Although there were job opportunities in the urbane area, it was nearly impasse to reach at that place due to the unavailability of the transportation. Nowadays, due to the good access of transportation we can reach to any place in search of job job even living in the pastoral area. As a result, we can have a lavish lifestyle. For this reason, life is really decorous in the present day, which was not possible in our grandparent's days.
Secondly, people are becoming more health conscious; do have conscience these days and there are copious of hospital all over the country, that is helping people to get panacea for incurable diseases. Drawing from my own experience, I was once suffered from malaria which is life taking. But, with the support of doctor I got remedy and I became healthy, which was not possible in the time of grandparents. For instance, my grandfather died due diarrhea. Firstly, people were not well educated about the simple sickness. Moreover, there were no hospital near by the rural area. These simple kinds of sickness are easily curable these days. This were not possible, if we were in the time before hundred years.
At last, I must admit that in some aspect life was easier in our grandparents time. It is from my grandmother experiences, she used to tell me that living in the neighborhood was like living in the family, which would create strong bond between the community. Moreover, people were ready to help in the quagmire of life to each other in those days. As a result, community life was easier. It is clearly to see why strong bond between people used to make their life easier, However, in many cases life was difficult in those days.
In light of the above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that life is relatively easier and comfortable in present days than in the time when our grandparents were child.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'aspects'' or 'aspect's'?
Suggestion: aspects'; aspect's
... grandparents were children but in some aspects life is easier today. If I were forced ...
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Line 3, column 635, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: job
... we can reach to any place in search of job job even living in the pastoral area. As a ...
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Line 5, column 555, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...kness. Moreover, there were no hospital near by the rural area. These simple kinds of s...
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Line 5, column 641, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[3]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...sickness are easily curable these days. This were not possible, if we were in the ti...
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Line 5, column 695, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...possible, if we were in the time before hundred years. At last, I must admit that in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, as a result, first of all, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 15.1003584229 219% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2220.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70338983051 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67855603886 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474576271186 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 705.6 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.821210518 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327975185096 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916478299952 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101347050795 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212866587413 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101983957413 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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