Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Two different generations face different kind of challenges in their lives. The idea that life has becomes easier for present generation as compared to older generations is not entirely accurate. I do not think this assertion is correct because of the following three reasons.
The term ‘Comfort and Ease’ holds different meaning for everyone in different situations. For instance, since the introduction of mobile phones and cars, it seemed to some, that performing day to day tasks for today’s generation is much easier as compared to the older generation. However, if we take a closer look at the lifestyle today, we will be able to observe, that such gadgets are no more comfort creating items and they have turned into necessity. So the gadgets that were meant to increase the comfort and ease of day to day work have also increased the amount of work one has to get done within a single day.
Our capability to tackle difficulty level of everyday challenges also depends on constant practice. One person who is from a newer generation may find even the easiest tasks such as driving everyday to office as difficult because it becomes tiring. On the other hand, there can be another person who enjoys driving a car to work because they had to walk 5 kilo meters to work every day twenty years ago. Hence introduction of cars and improved public transport made their life easier. Therefore, the level of difficulty of any task is relative to the capacity of the person who is performing it. This appetite of going through everyday challenges and patience to overcome certain difficulties has reduced in current generation.
In today's world, everyone is stressed due to increased competition in every field. Be it crucial things such as getting a job through several rounds of interviews or being up to date on the latest fashion. Everything is extremely different as compared to the times of our grandparents. Today, our generation stresses out at the minimal issues that our grandparents may have considered useless. For instance, in current generation, most of the children are burdened with the pressure of getting good grades in schools, whereas no one was concerned about grades in our grandparent's generations. Our grandparents usually tell us adventurous stories from their childhood. Can a child from 21st century imagine a life so free and full of imagination as it was then? The answer is no. This is due to the increasing global population and competition. Everyone today feels stuck in a rat race and blames capitalism for shrinking opportunities to spend time with families and friends.
In conclusion, life that both the generations have seen, are not roughly comparable and each have their own challenges. Our grandparents may had to walk for several kilo meters to send a message to their family but with the increased ease and resources, the need to send it quickly today has also ballooned. This shows that although life seems much comfortable today in terms of physical work, the pressure building on everyone's mind cannot be ignored making both generations facing equal level of distinct difficulties.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 244, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...s for today’s generation is much easier as compared to the older generation. Howev...
^^
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... even the easiest tasks such as driving everyday to office as difficult because it becom...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ers to work every day twenty years ago. Hence introduction of cars and improved publi...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, whereas, as to, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2619.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 519.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04624277457 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82693565949 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526011560694 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 828.9 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0758546887 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.730769231 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9615384615 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171245708121 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396601210164 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377310263002 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881909509251 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412436992265 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 244, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...s for today’s generation is much easier as compared to the older generation. Howev...
^^
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... even the easiest tasks such as driving everyday to office as difficult because it becom...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ers to work every day twenty years ago. Hence introduction of cars and improved publi...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, whereas, as to, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2619.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 519.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04624277457 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82693565949 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526011560694 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 828.9 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0758546887 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.730769231 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9615384615 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171245708121 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396601210164 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377310263002 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881909509251 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412436992265 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.