Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Museums are always on the list of most tourists. When visiting a new country , we are interested in exploring the culture and history of the place . The best place to begin is the Museum .
There are different types of Museums like Art , History , Natural sciences. They show different type of artifacts from the past and host exhibitions. It is one of the easiest way to explore an area of your interest when travelling. A natural history Museum can be of great interest to paleontologists and other enthusiasts. It can also be a place to meet people with similar interests easily especially when in a new place.
Some Museums are world famous and cater to a niche audience. They collect artifacts from the world and can have special screening with pieces borrowed from other Museums. Lets take the Example of Louvre in Paris . It attracts a lot of Art enthusiasts. It houses so many beautiful pieces . In one place one can view different forms of Art .We can also get guided tours that help us in understanding and appreciating Art . Visiting a museum can thus broaden our perspective and help discover new areas of interest.
Museums are also beautifully constructed and can be spectacular with respect to architecture and other features. They are thus developed as a tourist attraction . A feather in the cap of the countries' splendid structures should always be on the list of attractions to be visited for visitors. Again we can think of Louvre , its marvellous .
Some times the houses of famous people are also reinstated as museums , people can thus get a glimpse into the life of eminent personalities posthumously . The house of author Rabindranth Tagore is called Jorasanko. It has been preserved in Kolkata , India. The house of Anne frank is another example .
In conclusion , Museums are interesting places to visit for people from other places . They can hold exhibitions and even attract enthusiasts for special events. Exploring a country can begin with a humble trip to the museum , that may lead us to several other interesting places .Due to aforementioned reasons I believe people visit the museums when in a new place .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, thus, in conclusion, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95251396648 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88929922488 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494413407821 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5991371932 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1923076923 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11538461538 5.45110844103 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.5376344086 470% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253801863252 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714909514889 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603131563668 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148294235972 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533092245018 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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