Today's modern technology brought lot changes in both women and men and this changes are most welcome able and it has more benefits for the both Genre. In order to support my statement,I want to explore some real events in this discussion.
First of all, 50 years ago men women was working in crop field with the help ox and cow,once the John Deer invented the machine for digging the soil, people started using the technology and improved their agricultural production and their productivity rate. After this technological improvement green revolution occured all over the world, no one denial this statement , this modern technology reduced the men and women problems in the agricultural field.
Secondly, previously use travel with cow cart to go to other villages or town that almost takes whole day for the journey even they use to carries the food while travelling because of the time factor but after the technological improvement in the field of transportation, now both women and men enjoying the travel and moreover the can reach their destination with in the short period of time. even Now a day's women can handle the large crane and heavy loaded vehicles with the help modern of technology so that they need to do their traditional duties like cooking and taking care kids,husband and managing the house.
Thirdly, due to technological improvement in the communication and education sector, both men and women can learn the education easily and very accessibly through on line study. So both them can earn handsome income for their sophisticated life style.
Last but not least, due to the improvements in the technology, female become independent from the traditional role and they are very important icon in the world. Apart from their freedom their contributions are incredible in scientific world. For example there lot women working in the higher position in NASA.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'while', 'apart from', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.286956521739 0.229887763892 125% => OK
Verbs: 0.101449275362 0.158761421928 64% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0985507246377 0.0866891130778 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0521739130435 0.046263068375 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0405797101449 0.0685040099705 59% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115942028986 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0231884057971 0.0351676179071 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82119848388 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0231884057971 0.0309702414327 75% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.11884057971 0.0887237588012 134% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0115942028986 0.0209618222197 55% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00289855072464 0.0139019557991 21% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1919.0 2387.08602151 80% => OK
No of words: 311.0 408.028673835 76% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.17041800643 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.331189710611 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.237942122186 0.251872472559 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170418006431 0.174417080927 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128617363344 0.112833075102 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82119848388 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578778135048 0.524397521467 110% => OK
Word variations: 63.073357419 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6684587814 53% => OK
Sentence length: 28.2727272727 20.5533526081 138% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.161461191 48.84282405 191% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 174.454545455 120.699889404 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2727272727 20.5533526081 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 0.644075263715 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.54480286738 216% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 52.0669394914 45.7405998639 114% => OK
Elegance: 2.19402985075 1.45489161554 151% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292186396548 0.300154397459 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.130586816314 0.103427244359 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.103724096056 0.0752933317313 138% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.683194658504 0.497263757937 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157063910318 0.151897553556 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129049853499 0.114077575197 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814859256932 0.0781384742642 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.335052191059 0.336927656856 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0954084086237 0.067059652881 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18468600047 0.210909579961 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620364273338 0.0618886996521 100% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.6433691756 66% => OK
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30