The quality of the products that we buy is very important. People like to spend their mony on what they think is worth it. Some people think advertisements make a great impact on peoples view on a product; others disagree. In my view, advertizement make products seem much better then they really are for two important reasons.
First, in advertisements the capibility and quality of the products are ususlly exagurated. By saying and claiming things that are not ususlly right they persuaid their audiance to buy their products. For example, I remmeber when I was about 7 years old, when ever I wa...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'better than'?
Suggestion: better than
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Message: Did you mean 'better than'?
Suggestion: better than
...t advertisement make products seem much better then they really are by exagurating their ca...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...tisement make products seem much better then they really are by exagurating their ca...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ting their capibilites. Second, they dont tell people their products disadvantage...
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Message: Did you mean 'better than'?
Suggestion: better than
...in a way, they made their products look better then it really was. In sum, advertisement...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...y, they made their products look better then it really was. In sum, advertisement...
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Message: Did you mean 'better than'?
Suggestion: better than
...dvertisements often make their products better then what they really are. Not only they ex...
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Suggestion:
...ir products better then what they really are. Not only they exagurate about their...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'for example', 'as a result', 'in my view', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.18315018315 0.229887763892 80% => OK
Verbs: 0.168498168498 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0512820512821 0.0866891130778 59% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0769230769231 0.046263068375 166% => OK
Pronouns: 0.119047619048 0.0685040099705 174% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.122710622711 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.029304029304 0.0351676179071 83% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7147965699 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0164835164835 0.0309702414327 53% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0860805860806 0.0887237588012 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0128205128205 0.0209618222197 61% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.018315018315 0.0139019557991 132% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2741.0 2387.08602151 115% => OK
No of words: 491.0 408.028673835 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58248472505 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.281059063136 0.338922669872 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.205702647658 0.251872472559 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.148676171079 0.174417080927 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.091649694501 0.112833075102 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7147965699 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466395112016 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.3789330855 59.2087087015 90% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.8846153846 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1437311772 48.84282405 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.423076923 120.699889404 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8846153846 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.54480286738 162% => OK
Readability: 39.4548801504 45.7405998639 86% => OK
Elegance: 0.91959798995 1.45489161554 63% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217804121079 0.300154397459 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121026383987 0.103427244359 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0808202325649 0.0752933317313 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.440440876601 0.497263757937 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.119388111996 0.151897553556 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904468187817 0.114077575197 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122256627052 0.0781384742642 156% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.393217579259 0.336927656856 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.108163070407 0.067059652881 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202053419401 0.210909579961 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806227041645 0.0618886996521 130% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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