Movie theater
I appreciate to build a new movie theater in my neighborhood. I never go to the movie theater because of there isn't it in my neighborhood. I and my family have been living here since 2010. here is the best place in Theran while unfortunately here is lack of movie theater. I and Ali were the best friends that we spent all our time with together. we wished go to the movie theater where we can see all character face to face. Misfortune, we don't have any money that we can afford ticket of movie theater. he decide to each both of us implore of our school manager which he go all studants of school to the movie theater in Karaj. sadly, he reject our request and I and my friend become deppresed and this event was the worst memory in my lifetime. I am glad for build the movie theater in my neighnorhod and I support it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...o to the movie theater because of there isnt it in my neighborhood. I and my family ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...se of there isnt it in my neighborhood. I and my family have been living here sin...
^
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Here
...amily have been living here since 2010. here is the best place in Theran while unfor...
^^^^
Line 1, column 348, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...at we spent all our time with together. we wished go to the movie theater where we...
^^
Line 1, column 442, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... character face to face. Misfortune, we dont have any money that we can afford ticke...
^^^^
Line 1, column 481, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to ticket'
Suggestion: to ticket
... dont have any money that we can afford ticket of movie theater. he decide to each bot...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 506, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
... we can afford ticket of movie theater. he decide to each both of us implore of ou...
^^
Line 1, column 509, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'decides'.
Suggestion: decides
... can afford ticket of movie theater. he decide to each both of us implore of our schoo...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 574, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'goes'.
Suggestion: goes
... implore of our school manager which he go all studants of school to the movie the...
^^
Line 1, column 631, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sadly
...f school to the movie theater in Karaj. sadly, he reject our request and I and my fri...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 641, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'rejects'.
Suggestion: rejects
...o the movie theater in Karaj. sadly, he reject our request and I and my friend become ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 666.0 1977.66487455 34% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 158.0 407.700716846 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21518987342 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 4.48103885553 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46432647658 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 212.727598566 41% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556962025316 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 618.680645161 35% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.7798071617 48.9658058833 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.6 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9 5.45110844103 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450354151925 0.236089414692 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217864434788 0.076458572812 285% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152197188724 0.0737576698707 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.450354151925 0.150856017488 299% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 10.9000537634 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 86.8835125448 26% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.