There is no doubt that our neighbors are quite important and essential part in our lives. We spent large amount of times with them each day. There are so many characteristics that should be in any person. In my point of view, I believe that helpfulness and kindness are the most important qualities that should be in any neighbor. I feel that way for two reasons supported by two examples, which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, having a helpful neighbor is a great addition and a huge benefit for any individual. Of course, everyone in any small part of world do his need neighbor's help in one occasion at least. We always have problems and unexpected accidental events, therefore, we always need somebody to stand with us. To illustrate this idea let us consider the following example. I remember when I was freshman at Jordan University of science and Technology, studying civil engineering, I have a trouble with the online registration process. Fortunately, one of my neighbors was a student the same university, so I went to him told him what the problem I have. He did not hesitate to help me to register and edit my schedule. moreover, he went with me at the next day to the university as a guided student for me.
Secondly, I think that being kind is important as much as being helpful. Kind neighbors will add much flavor to our daily life. We can do many activities and spend lots of hours with them feeling bored. For instance, I have a wonderful friend, Salem, that he is living behind us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 721, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...lp me to register and edit my schedule. moreover, he went with me at the next day to the...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, at least, for instance, i feel, i think, no doubt, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 272.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62867647059 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73546953501 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584558823529 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3031048464 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.0588235294 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106802247152 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348029102817 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361954230782 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735598645801 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00352599695749 0.0645574589148 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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