Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is considered by some people that process of preparing food has become more convenient and effortless and it has led to make better people's lifestyle. I am absolutely agree with this point of view.
Firstly, we do not spend many time for cooking because there a lot of devises which could make this process easier and faster. For example, scientists have invented such items for cooking as a oven, a meat grinder and a dishwasher. Using them we might save time and spend it doing things which we really love: reading, singing or walking with our friends.
Secondly, ingredients have become more available for people rather than 20 years ago when people had had to get up early in order to be in the first part of the queue in a shop with products as it was in Russia, for instance. Moreover, price of ingredients decreased as there are no limits on quantity, thus most people could afford them at the normal price.
Thirdly, there are a lot of ready meal which you might find being in a shop, thus we should only warm it and eat. It very convenient for people who have busy lifestyle and have possibility to have a lunch or dinner between one business to another and it also suitable for them as such food do not need their involvement in the preparing process.
All in all, new food developments improved our live as we save not only time, but also money which we could invest in our children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...tter peoples lifestyle. I am absolutely agree with this point of view. Firstly, we...
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Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...nt of view. Firstly, we do not spend many time for cooking because there a lot of devi...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...have invented such items for cooking as a oven, a meat grinder and a dishwasher. ...
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Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...em we might save time and spend it doing things which we really love: reading, si...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: had
...le rather than 20 years ago when people had had to get up early in order to be in the f...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: HAVE_A_BREAKFAST[1]
Message: When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: 'have lunch'.
Suggestion: have lunch
... busy lifestyle and have possibility to have a lunch or dinner between one business to anoth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 254.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55905511811 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41995035328 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59842519685 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.0677443337 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.8 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8 5.45110844103 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11734205575 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472617888622 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371282660319 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715722817574 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370498504662 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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