People are dealing with different situations having busy schedule as they are living materialistic lifestyle. To be specific, household chores, academia, family issues and the professional life at a same time is really arduous to manage together. Though they are intrigued for their passion, it is not possible because of the hectic life. In the same way, I also have abundant desires that need to be done and if I get time and have to choose among the tasks: sports, cooking and handmade work, I definitely prefer to cook cousin that I have never tried before though I like to have it. I will explain these ideas in the subsequent paragraph.
To begin with, I really like to taste different foods from different tribes and ethnic group according to the specialty. I have tasted food from Indian and continental restaurant, Chinese restaurant, Thai restaurant and many more. But all among them, I really like the food from my country that is called Newari food. Though I always eat the food from that restaurant but I have no idea how to prepare. Moreover, I am in foreign country and unable to have that business here but want to give my tongue the same flavor. If I get time, I am really eager to try that recipe and learn to cook that food at my home.
Secondly, people are suffering from obesity and having multiple health issues because of the unhealthy food that they are consuming from cafes. In the same way like other people, I am not eating nutritious food that my body needs because of which I have to suffer from ligament tear and bone fracture. So when the time is available to me, I will be successful in my mission that I am planning to learn how to cook. As a result, I will be abled to receive the vitamins that my body needs from the food that I prepare for myself where I can maintain hygiene too.
Finally, dishes from restaurant are not reasonable and really expensive comparing to the food that we prepare at home. Furthermore, they include taxes, service charge and delivery charge if we order at our home. In this way, cuisines cost virtually three times more expensive. To be honest, I do not have that much money to afford food from out for my lunch, dinner and breakfast. If I learn to cook, it is possible to save some money for my study. Consequently, I do not have to take any educational lone from bank.
In light of the above mentioned reasons though games that I never played and the handmade work are important for people in their life, I really prefer in learning cooking to make myself healthy and save some money.
- Do you agree or disagree Reading fiction such as novels and short stories is more enjoyable than watching movies 70
- Describe an object that is very special in your life Explain why this object is important to you Include details and examples in your explanation 45
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement When people succeed it is entirely because of hard work Luck has nothing to do with their success Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position 73
- Some people think that the main purpose of schools is to teach children to become good citizens and workers rather than benefiting them as individuals Agree Disagree 83
- Nowadays people are busy with many things If you were given a short period of time what would you choose 1 Learn to play a new sport you never played 2 Learn to cook food in a different way 3 Learn to do some hand made work like clothes 75
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 603, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...hough I like to have it. I will explain this ideas in the subsequent paragraph. T...
^^^^
Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... people, I am not eating nutritious food that my body needs because of which I ha...
^^
Line 9, column 164, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cook'.
Suggestion: to cook
...their life, I really prefer in learning cooking to make myself healthy and save some mo...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, as a result, to begin with, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2103.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58169934641 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47767501152 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488017429194 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6617323549 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5909090909 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8636363636 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175237424255 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562247885455 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485854111027 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113818441554 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315036409006 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 603, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...hough I like to have it. I will explain this ideas in the subsequent paragraph. T...
^^^^
Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... people, I am not eating nutritious food that my body needs because of which I ha...
^^
Line 9, column 164, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cook'.
Suggestion: to cook
...their life, I really prefer in learning cooking to make myself healthy and save some mo...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, as a result, to begin with, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2103.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58169934641 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47767501152 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488017429194 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6617323549 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5909090909 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8636363636 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175237424255 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562247885455 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485854111027 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113818441554 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315036409006 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.