Our current way of life will have a negative impact on future generations.
It is the our lifestyle that tells how it is going to effect our future generation. As our future generation learn from us and take the torch forward by taking the roles and responsibilities which we like them to take forward. No one can deny the fact that our current life style is going to have an adverse impact on future generations. I believe this on the basis of mainly two reasons and I will be developing this in subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, people of our generation don't enjoy the life to the fullest and are always stressed about future. We are not living in the present and focusing on the future most of our time. I believe this based on my personal experience which always haunts me that how my generation is going to be learning frour our way of living life. My elder brother, who is 10 years older than me, always keep stressing about the future - how he has to save money & provide good quality education to his son. He never enjoyed his present in last 10 years (to be precise) I would say. At the same time, he has lot of expectations from his son. This is effecting his son a lot negatively as son is pressurized a lot to get the good grades from the early childhood only. Son is not having freedom to learn new things of his personal interest and this will make him a bookworm one day and won't be able to pursue what he wants in his life, just because of his father's expectations. On the basis of this experience, I feel that stressing too much and over expectations will have a very negative effect on our future generations.
Secondly, we are a generation who thinks a lot about society before taking any bold step. We always think that what the society people will be thinking about us if we will take any step which is against the so-called "rules" formed by the society. Basis my personal experience, I have seen people who were not bold enough to take the bold steps just because they have not seen anyone from their older generations taking these steps. As one of my friend wanted to pursue a carrier as a air hostess but he couldn't speak to his family about it. This is because he has seen his parents taking about society and worried about how society will think if anyone takes such decision since it is believed that air hostess jobs are for females only , which is just baseless. Due to this, I personally think that people from our coming generation will not able to take the bold steps and this will affect their carriers & life adversely.
Concludingly, I will say that over expectations and not willing to take bold steps are the few reasons which tells that our future son and daughters are going to suffer, seeing the current way of our's life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
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Suggestion: don't
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: couldn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, as to, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2217.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 493.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49695740365 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49805579256 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444219066937 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 700.2 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7531817099 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.85 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.65 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30692376824 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104744333808 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111145925539 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237011306569 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095982834851 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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