In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
The few last decades are characterized by all momentous changes that have resulted in major differences between young people in the past and today. There is a controversial debate between people that whether youngsters in the past were more dependent on their parents or young people today are not able to make decisions on their own? In my opinion, young people today can decide on their future and life much better than youngsters in the past. In what follows, I will pinpoint my reasons to support my opinion.
The first point coming to my mind is that the advent of new technologies has provided extraordinary opportunities for youngsters today to become self-sufficient persons. In fact, there was a situation in the past that young people had to depend on their elders. In other words, if they even wanted to be separate persons, their condition would not allow them. To clarify this point, compare a person who wants to choose his major in a collage. Before, without the internet, all people had to get their information from the elders that had experience in this process, while today people can easily access first-hand information by surfing the internet. Besides, most of the young people in the past took their career from their parents and as a result they more relyed on their parents in other aspects of their life.
Another point which deserves some words here is that the consequences of some moral behaviors that were very prevail in the past societies had led that youngsters have not had autonomous personality. In fact, obedience was a criterion for measuring the amount of respect for elders. The more youngsters listen to their parent's words and became more obedient, it was concluded that the more they were respecting their parents. This issue was so bold that young people were dependent on their parents to make the decision for their marriage and select their love partner. There is anecdotal evidence. My grandmother said that she has married my grandfather since his father had made this decision.
Finally, education systems today are trying to raise confident and dependent people and they also encourage parents to respect their children's decision, it is obvious that in such an age, young people can make more confident decisions for their lives.
From what has been discussed, we can safely contend that youngsters today do not rely on their parents much and today's society is such that they can make decisions on their own easily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 818, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...parents in other aspects of their life. Another point which deserves some words ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, if, so, while, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00724637681 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58569774108 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487922705314 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3858236715 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.523098361867 0.236089414692 222% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173313727844 0.076458572812 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170336300808 0.0737576698707 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.333898596148 0.150856017488 221% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850869263636 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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