It is said that, student life is the best life. To enjoy and experience this life people attend college or university where they can gather and increase knowledge, earn certified degree for future life, explore new things and have fun.
The first and most important reason people attend college and university to gather or increase their knowledge. People start getting knowledge from their school; but it is not enough. The thirst to learn and know more lead people to join college. The universe is a place of different unknown things. People can learn about those things by themselves but colleges show the right path to explore these unknown things. People can increase their previous knowledge from the well trained instructor of the college and university.
Secondly, people can get certified degree by completing university and that is the another reason to join college or university. The world has become a very competitive place. People get the chance to do their dream job by showing how capable they are through their certificates. Therefore, it is another good reason for people to attend college and get certified for their future career.
Lastly, people attend college to explore new things and have fun. College is the place where people can make lifetime friendship and memories. They can participate in extracurricular activities, go on a study tour, make use of their hobbies and so on. This is the time when a person can experiment anything. The ultimate fun and joy of college life comes once in everyone's life.
College or university is one lifetime opportunity to explore new things and make memories for the rest of the life. One person surely do not want to miss his/her chance to make their own life memorable.
- TPO-30 - Integrated Writing Task A little over 2,200 years ago, the Roman navy attacked the Greek port city of Syracuse. According to some ancient historians, the Greeks defended themselves with an ingenious weapon called a "burning mirror": a polished co 73
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree 50
- do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. 60
- Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take 50
- It is more important to keep old friends than it is to make new friends. 60
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 290.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0275862069 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55948493629 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48275862069 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4280533682 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7368421053 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2631578947 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21052631579 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333326031983 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115924709759 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993591052968 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196313655557 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656927521758 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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