Today, education becomes more important for a person to have it than before, and this discussion will show the reasons of why people enter the school.
Firstly, people attend school for learning. Parents put their children in the school to learn them and make them a good generation to build their country.
Secondly, people get in school to make friendship with other people in the surrounding. when you become a member in a class you should make your friends circle so, that will make you an extrovert person that will facilitate communication with people around you.
In addition, people step inside the school to expand their knowledge to increase the opportunity of having a good career. For example, if a person wants to work in a good vocation in a sample salary he must graduate from high school and for having an excellent career he must finish the university grade. Because the employer hired a qualified person.
Furthermore, some children are forced by their parents to go into the school, so some of them will not be interested in it, so they will fail.
Also, students postgraduate will be confidence person in the community, because their skill that earned. Like having some languages that will help them to make the communication easy with the others in surrounding them.
Last but not least, some people attend school to achieve their dreams. And I am one of these people, lots of complexities I forced, like moving from one country to another, studying some methods, so, that make my studying complicated but I keep working to achieve for my dream.
To sum up, education is required for all people and in all countries, so maybe that will be the main reason for students to attend school and learning more skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...er he must finish the university grade. Because the employer hired a qualified person. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ttend school and learning more skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86868686869 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57680707476 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531986531987 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2555379078 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.285714286 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258467765539 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108119623926 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911145746942 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129421281813 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703500040538 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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