People should alway try to do something new in their lives.
Different people have different personalities. On this ground, there are some who seek new challenges and others who prefer security. Some people are inclined to enjoy trying new things and taking risks, while other people are more comfortable remaining confined to what they know for the sake of feeling secure. Personally, I prefer trying new things and taking bold steps because, by doing so, I am able to make beneficial changes in my life, and something new usually opens doors and makes life more interesting.
First of all, trying new things enables me to make beneficial changes in my life. If we look around at our world, we can readily see innovations that sprang from someone’s desire to try something new. If we hadn’t tried new things, we would have lived as if we were stuck in a time loop. Take transportation, for example. If people had been content with just walking or riding horses, they would never have developed various modes of transport. By having the desire to do something new in spite of the risks involved, people have been able to make improvements in the way that they live, work, and play.
Moreover, I like to take risks because it makes life more interesting and enjoyable. I couldn’t imagine my life without taking risks and trying new things. The people who do not try out new things live a kind of boring life; they haven’t lived life to the fullest. The excitement, fear, adventure, and joy we feel while trying out new things are ineffable. For instance, my grandfather has rarely been on any adventures or done any sports activities, so he doesn’t have any interesting stories to tell. His life has been very dull and monotonous. Though I am younger than he is, I have taken part in many dangerous sports activities like scuba diving, bungee jumping and trekking various mountain ranges. Also, I have traveled a lot and tried multifarious food from all over the world.
In conclusion, I reaffirm my point of view that there are various merits involved in trying out new things or taking risks. So instead of just sticking to what we know, one should opt to do something different. By doing so, one will be able to learn various new things and make improvements. Not only can we explore novel ideas, but the enjoyment linked with trying out new things for the first time is worth carrying them out.
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- The government should spend money on university education or on the education of young children 76
- Some local languages are becoming extinct Do you think this is a positive or negative development 76
- Behaviour of people depends on external factors and not due to internal factors 73
- One should never burrow money from a friend this is not good for their relationship 73
- People should keep trying to reach their goals even if they seem impossible to achieve 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75980392157 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59122302303 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539215686275 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0873608052 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2727272727 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68181818182 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31373778184 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960672363519 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768710653829 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21267575241 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03062043873 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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